Suinaides wallpaper (my anime) (not complete)

[preddie45]

this is a wallpaper for the anime im makin. its not complete but i thought i'd show anyways. some mild crits r accepted

if u cant see it copy and paste this

http://preddie46.tripod.com/cgi-bin/natsuirowallpaper.jpg

 

[[RaideN]]

Well dude, it's ok I guess since it's all hand drawn.. but you could use more layers and detail.

 

[Fenumeher]

its not bad but i would make him more muscular if i where you! chicks dig for that! :laff:

 

[preddie45]

well they guys 17 so im thinking he wont be as huge as some anime chars.

 

[X-iT_W0uN|)]

Wow I think it looks brilliant although it's not finished

 

[preddie45]

wow i didnt expect anyone to say that. ive been getting bad responses from ppl i kno lol

 

[X-iT_W0uN|)]

Doesn't matter peoples taste differ I really like it

 

[preddie45]

ya i just drew a pic imma gonna add but it looks a bit weird. i dont know what to do so could someone tell me. heres the link

http://preddie46.tripod.com/cgi-bin/lower_body.bmp

also keep in mind that this is a quick sketch ..or first draft whatever you prefer.

 

[Fenumeher]

i looks good but i dont realy know. i prefer hand drawing. i never drawed a char with paint.

 

[NeLo]

X-iT_W0uN|) now i KNOW your just doing the to be nice. Cuz in reality that could use a lot of more work. OK here is what you really need to do. Shorten his neck. Cuz its too long. Lets see what else. His hands are just...gone heh. Make some fingers n what not. And the thing around him is no good. Get rid of that or make it further apart from him. Cuz its too close. and i think thats it. Ill edit if i see anything else.

Edit: yep i saw some more. Ok here is what else. Give him more muscles. In the arms and in the chest area. Also i GOTTA ask this...What the hell is that around his waist? I mean seriously. What is that lol. Im not being mean. Im just wondering wtf is that?? Also it looks like he has NO legs what-so-ever And the thing around his crouch. That is pretty damn long. Is he like SUPER Manly or what? lol

 

[X-iT_W0uN|)]

He's not finished that why I didn't look so closely I'll crit on that stuff when he's finished

 

[NeLo]

True be dat. Well your off the hook this time lol jk anyway i just posted cuz i think with my knowledge of the force ( ) you could do a LOT better.