Nice... I've never heard of this anime before, but I'd like to say a few things
His pants look way too big, especially compared to that picture up at the top. His feet are also very large, and need more shaping, since they look too box-like... Similar to eye-glass cased... only bigger.
actually this first 3 pics in the update aren't smoothed at all. only the bottom right 1 is smoothed. i'll fix the pants and the shoes but after 2 hours of striaght modeling i was a little impatient with the feet