feel the light(clockwork remake)

[|Da|K|]

i tryed to make a remake of clock work watcha think?

 

[owa]

its ok but its not your best work, whyc didn't you just put this in the already made thread. Its what most peopel od when they remake somthing and the thread is still alive.

 

[greentaco]

It still doesn't look good. I'd take out the white effects. They're not good.

 

[Wangster]

well, srry, i dont like, the only thing i like here is the brush work.
i dislike all the 3d stuff.

 

[owa]

I'd stop with those beam things, and maybe try somthing else in cinema 4d. I can't say I'm a fan of your Cinema 4D stuff and those beam things ou always try to use never turn out well.

 

[Wangster]

i like the beam stuff, and why do you comment twice? 0_o...

 

[almostdeleted]

Its ok.. Ive seen better for you, none of the stuff really belns with one another.

The 3d needs a lot of work and the beam of light is just... thier.. no real meaning of it being thier, its just thier cause its thier.. Its not blended into the bg well..

If you were a n00b I would say 9/10
But your not so 6.5/10 ive seen much better then you.. No offence or anything, your still good

 

[Glenn]

I like it, exept for the white effect, take it out and it will look alot better.

 

[owa]

Originally posted by Wangster
i like the beam stuff, and why do you comment twice? 0_o...

Cause I had more tiem to comment this itme, I had to type somthing up last itme, a review for a movie for shcool

 

[Jaredster]

looks good execpt the 2d beams over it.

 

[Marauder]

i still dont like the brushing...........

 

[Twilight]

ya need some textures of some sort on the objects

 

[|Da|K|]

aight i got some tips from naz Ma man ....i'm tryin some new stuff now