ok letst start with the critz for now :
lets start with the model
1. you kinda screwed the back up, it just looks too blocky even smooth shaded and it has too defined corners.
2. i think the hair still is (*excuse me*) sh1t and you shoulda redo it at once.
3. shoes look like some military boots dont they ? gg
4. the stuff of the robe coming out the upper belt doesnt look like cuffed, it looks like ehm .... a box.
5. pants arent as baggy as they should be.
6. the head is still too small for the rest of the body.
ok lets go for the skin now:
1. boots are just too primitive and i dont think he had diamonds at the back of the shoes , hadn't he ?
2. back is screwed up, looks like a lot of line which arent in the right place for now.
3. face skin is crap. the eyes are stretched too much to the upper, brolly isnt a mouse.
4. the robes skin is a bit too smooth, you dont see any highlights.
and a few glitches though:
1.pants-to-boots-area has dark points in it, looks like wrong-side-flipped faces.
2. back of the arm-to-hand-area is some glitch in the gold part.
3. head is just stuck up the body, this is noticable and hasnt any need of it.
correct these points and itll look a bit more like brolly as it does now
