brolly WIP

[Cold Steel]

Really, i'm not trying to be rude, but you said you where planning a green color for him in this form, does that mean this is his ussj/lssj form?, now Nuttzy don't go nuts about this, i just want to ask.

 

[Nuttzy]

well that is correct, this form was planned to be the green haired one, BUT the hair looks better gold, possibly this regular ssj will be his normal form, and the trans wil be lssj, we'll determine that when we are done with form 1, i cant do much about tit til i get my pc fixed,



and if ANYONE bashes zereths skin, i appluad your skills at insulting superior talent, theres few other skinners as good as him here,

 

[Cold Steel]

One more comment though, normal ssj have pupils in their eyes. Lssj do not have em. It's a small detail, but it would make it look better.

 

[solidus]

looks good, the only crits i have are that the head looks a bit small for the neck/body, the verticie at the bottom of the stomach muscles could be a little higher, and two on the back could go out a little (*edit*, and down) to smooth it off, but other than that, good job.

 

[UniSol]

Sorry, but that head is totally screwed up, i think first off all that that head should be bigger in the horizontal way, and the face needs a make up LOL, but else its a sweet model :smile:
and also the back is totally flatten, that shouldnt be like that...

 

[Nuttzy]

the stomack looks that way cuz if you look at the previous pics i built the body alot bulkier, shijing resized him to make him fit the skeleton and it makes him look a lil stretched, but it has the size down more accurate to the form we were going for,


unisol this has to be the 5 millionth time ive said this, IN THIS THREAD ALONE, now read it one last time this is the last time im saying it then im closing this thread


QUIT BASHING THE HEAD, IT IS PAST THE TIME FOR CRITS


UNLESS YOU WANT TO MAKE A BETTER ONE AND SEND IT TO ME TO BE PLACED ON THE MODEL BE QUIET, IT IS AS ITS GOING TO BE AND IF ANY CHANGES ARE TO BE MADE ITS OUR DECISION NOT YOURS,


maybe capital letters helped yall read this, but then again knowing alot of you i could write it on your eyeball and youd still ignore it,



and the back is not flat its fairly shaped it just looks flat in that picture, look at the other pcitures of the back in this thread

 

[Zereth]

Goku ssj .. By insulting my work, u only show how noob and none grown up u are..
And second of all, U can't even do half of the things people here do . I am not saying that brolly is good, but the way u crittisize it it turns out **** ..
I won't even try to flame you, most people here alredy know what u are, so u should get a hint ..

Anyways, People, this is the last time I'm doing a skin for the public .. The way some guys here crittisize it , I feel like not doing anything .
I'm sorry peeps . Later all ..

 

[Polo]

Goku ssj .. By insulting my work, u only show how noob and none grown up u are..
And second of all, U can't even do half of the things people here do . I am not saying that brolly is good, but the way u crittisize it it turns out **** ..
I won't even try to flame you, most people here alredy know what u are, so u should get a hint ..

Anyways, People, this is the last time I'm doing a skin for the public .. The way some guys here crittisize it , I feel like not doing anything .
I'm sorry peeps . Later all ..

Calm down! You seem to have a problem controling yourself.. Calm down!! He was just critting your skin and how to make it better, He didn't say once that 'it ****ing sucked like **** omg i can make better with my eyes closed his hairs ugly', (Just an example.)

And how exactly is he noob? Usually noobs don't know how to give proper critism.

 

[Zereth]

Here's an example ..

"3. face skin is crap."

I said what I had to say . He that is such a skilled guy should manage to do much better I suppouse ..

 

[Polo]

Here's an example ..

"3. face skin is crap."

I said what I had to say . He that is such a skilled guy should manage to do much better I suppouse ..

It's an opinion, I FOR SURE can't do better and I also have a problem with the face.. Now I'd like to end if you'd like we could carry it on AIM but I don't want to start anything that the moderators/admins would have to finish.

 

[Zereth]

There is nothing to discuss .. I said mine , U keep practising and u'll get better .. Later .

 

[Bolteh2]

zereth you have been warned before about flaming, and im gonna warn you also, so dont be surprised when the day come that you wont be able to post on this forum again

 

[Polo]

Okay well, Now thats don with.. I'd like to give out my critism.

Model Crits.

a. Firstly, I believe Brolli is about that height though.. He's a bit wider, Like this he looks like some caker.

b. Secondly, The back is a bit blocky.

c. Third, Head is WAY too small..

d. And fourth, Is his hair really like that? :O

Skin Crits.

a. The Torsos (Frontal) Muscles look really good, I gotta give you a thumbs up for those. :yes: :yes:

b. The back of Brolli looks really funky, I mean the skin doesn't look right.. Unless it's only being stretched because of the model.

c. His face doesn't look quite like Brolli (Not only because of the fact that it looks blurry as hell), His eyes are a bit longer in width then height.. But the vains seem to be placd correctly and they don't look that bad..

d. Are his boots really purple?! 'Cause last time I looked at Brolli my eyes didn't hurt as much... But honesty, His boots are red.

e.g.

But don't take these as an offence, Take these in consideration..

And just be happy your Brolli doesn't look like this guys

And one last thing, I believe this is even the best Brolli for ESF :] I think It'll look kick ass in-game (I'm talking about the Brolli skinned by Zereth ! lol)

 

[Nuttzy]

polo, i said if anybody made dumbass post like that again i was having the thread closed, read my post on the previous page if you dont remember why,

im not requesting the thread be closed however, i dont want to eradicate shijing and zereths effort cuz they my teammates on this one, it wouldnt be right

but i hope they are more motivated to finish this model for you girls

 

[Polo]

Your getting mad over crits and you called me a dumbass because I thought all your pants were just other models edited. *sigh*

Fine.. How about I don't say their crits and I say I'm just stating what I don't like about the model? Whatever, I won't continue posting in this thread since it bothers you THAT much.

 

[Cold Steel]

Just shut up polo, this will only get the thread closed, if you want to keep it open, then give em some compliments instead of wining that much.

 

[Polo]

Whatever, I won't continue posting in this thread since it bothers you THAT much.

Do you not read. I admit this is useless spam.. But just get off my back I posted crits because I wanted to, And he has a problem with that?

 

[Suh Dude]

guys stop it calm down dudes Peace out ****ok??

ontopic:i can't wait to see the thing skinned and manufacured to the meat market oh i mean ahhhh awww i forget

 

[Nuttzy]

i never said i had a problem with crits, i simply said 2 or 3 pages ago that it is past the time for crits and not to post any more of them, so you see you couldve saved yourself this heartache by reading before you posted,

its not the crits that are pissin me off like you may think, its all of you ignoring that i said that no more crits are necessary several pages ago, and acting like we're the *******s for possesing the ability to read, shijing, zereth and myself are the ones making the model, NOT you, that is all you need to know until its done,

 

[Judge]

/me waves the closing stick around, and wonders if he should close it...

calm down people, this useless spam is not gonna help at all, just get back ontopic please.