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I named this character Jin Kyto,AKA Night-Fox I have been practicing my clothing and hair sketches since last night and I'd like to know what you guys think!

This picture isn't much but a sketch..But I thought I should ask for some crits about this to help me sketch better..Thanx all! ;/ :)
 
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the head sux.. but the hair rox
 
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nice but I dont see the his armes.
 
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k the nose.. argh!!! wat is the nose?! otherwise its kool.. very like flowy... face is weird..
 
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im tierd of those small noses! thats why his nose is huge...
I've got a nack for drawing like this now..
The face? whats wrong??! All i can say thats wrong with it is the eyes, the his begining bangs are slopy.. And his arms are behind his back! they are like this \|/ (\=right arm,/= left arm,|=back)
 
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Nicely done but for me the head just doesn't work... I'd post my own picture but 1. I don't have a scanner and 2. it isn't near close to your level.

Nice job.....New head....but thats just my opinion I could be wrong.
 
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face looks a little odd..
 
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Thanks all for the crits, I'll be working on his look now, the nose will be smaller next time i post a sketch, and the clothes and hair will not be so mystical..lol

Again, tahnx for your honesty!:cry:
 

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I liek it cept for the face the face just makes me hate it. Fix the nose pluse he needs arms. you prolly drew arms but you should make them atleast noticable a bit right now I think hes like a cripple from waramps. Also is it a guy? cause if its a chick it looks like a dood.

*Edit* I just reliezed its a guy so forget that last bit*Edit*
 
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the face... argh.... i neva seen a dude with that long hair b4 in ne anime.....
 
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then u need to watch more animes... or work on ur spelling :rolleyes:
 

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