My Dragonball Z Fanfic!

[Micknel]

Lol what a ****ing jew.

 

[Damaera]

Lol what a ****ing jew.

Hi, Xenon.

Stop being rude, I've already reported your posts, going to report this one as well. I don't appreciate it when people trash my 7 year fanfic. I've worked long and hard on it. And on top of that, I'm going to have to :warning:warn:warning: you for registering just to insult me. T_T

 

[Raven]

Dude... What..? Seven years for that piece of crap? an 8 year old could come up with better in 30 minutes... That just makes me think you're an even bigger loser than originally thought... Damn dude get out some more this is terrible.

have a nice warning for flaming.

 

[Sting]

jeeeezz whats this??
chapters are a bit short dude.

Try to work more on a story then acualy the fighting part so fast.
I miss an intro story.

Isaac new character ok but who the hell is this guy and where did he came from?
Try to make longer chapters with a bit more story into it.
And stop the fatass part because it doesnt fit in DBZ

 

[hleV]

Who the **** is Isaac?

 

[Damaera]

He's Isaac. A character I've been developing for seven years.

 

[hleV]

I know that he's a your-made character. But who the **** is he? Third Goku's son?

 

[Damaera]

Isaac called Goku "Dad". I'll let you figure that out for yourself.

 

[hleV]

There might be another reason why Isaac is calling Goku "Dad". Whatever, it's clear who Isaac is now.

 

[Sicron]

Gohan..Goten and Isaac? I would have at least expected Gosaac or something similar to that.

 

[Damaera]

Shut up, you know Isaac is the best name ever.

 

[Synth]

Part 2 pl0x?

 

[Damaera]

moooooooooooooooooo

 

[Sicron]

You slept with Sub?

 

[Damaera]

I'm a cow.

 

[Sicron]

Oh.






Well, that's definitely less shocking than if you would have told us that you had slept with Sub.

 

[Tenzo]

I plagiarized this.

Yeah right. Like we'll believe that.

 

[Damaera]

baaaaaaaaaaaaa

 

[Cold Steel]

I knew there was something familiar about it.

 

[Damaera]

I'm a sheep.