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Nah, i was just talking out of my arse :D
 
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neieiiiiiiiiiiiiigh
 
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Yeah, like, how his name came to be Isaac, instead of Gosaac.
 
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Dude i don't think fanfic are that short i mean come on seven years and thats what you make with seven years of work you could make a book with more then 300 pages this is just less then 1 sorry but you could use a lot of improved and so on anyways it good to laugh at it for one sec but sorry i just don't like it remake it longer each chapter with back story and maybe ill like it.
 

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I'm still laughing....Roflolmao ...omfg =)) Great Fan Fic...one chapter had 4 sentences =))
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I'm a horse.
 
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you know why i kinda like you Dam...Because you're funny :))(and you keeped the serious voice after some posts:)) i liked how you let us to think that you actually worked 7 years for that piece of crap :)) Great Job
 
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Sorry for bumping this, but this award winning novel needs more attention.
 
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I'm sorry, but even for a fanfic, it's crap.
 
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Normally I'd assume that the author is joking, but since it's Dam, I don't even know anymore...
 
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Are you saying you don't like my unique writing style?
 
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Damera, This was a stunning and brillant Fan-fic and I can even go as far to say that this shit is better than the actual DBZ

Very good character development, the first lines and "Dad" was mentioned ovbiously giving us a clue that Isaac/Gosaac is Goku's 3rd Son (How does Chi-Chi and Bulma survive these?) The Power of Seven years can do a lot Dam, and you've demonstrated that.

Also the chapters were super LONG! I loved it Dam! And Yet I still want more!

I love you Dam, make more.

5 STARS

- Bob's Reviews.
 
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Thanks broseph.
 
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No worries, Broseph.
 

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