It looks alright, the spatial relationships are a little off. Try moving the main face shot over to the right till the center of the face is about two-thirds the distance from the left to the right. In the type, keep "swordsperson" the same size, but increrase the size uniformly of "minagi" so the width is the same as "swordsperson." Make sure the sides line up on the text, and decrease the linespacing. I don't think you need that line thingy connecting the two words. This is just a suggestion, but I think it will look better. You might even try inverting the main minagi face-shot and setting the blending mode to "screen." There'd be white lines instead of black lines and it might jump off the sig more. But that again may be too much.