goku wip (my first pbp from scratch)

[Iyce Da Kidd]

sup.. im making a goku model pbp... it will be my first pbp model ever!! lol... i hope it comes out good :smile:

smooth shades later :]

 

[Nuttzy]

i thought your gohan was your first pbp anways its not enough o say much, get a leg or an arm in there

 

[Optional]

Looks like a nice start. When you finish, you should take a screenshot in flat shaded mode, and I will do a drawover.

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

update

i thought your gohan was your first pbp anways its not enough o say much, get a leg or an arm in there

gohan was just cylenders :laff: and i remade the chest... didnt look like goku to me.. here's an update...

 

[Optional]

Ah, nice update. Looks more like Goku's chest.

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

here's a small update on the goku model.. i just added the belt and the little undershirt thing...

 

[Optional]

Make the crevice thing for his shirt longer.

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

w33333 update.. i need to work more on the arms though

 

[Death The Jedi]

well.. the torso looks nice, the arms are really messed up though, and are obviously not done poly by poly. They're reshaped spheres..

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

nonono.. reshaped cylenders.. lol

 

[Bolteh2]

ehm, be sure to not rip the head this time :x

other things:

remodel the arms or shape them into a somewhat more natural looking shape

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

im not S-bolt ;-)

 

[ShadowKillah]

looks good, except for arms :O

 

[The Sourcerer]

yeah the arms look kinda messed up

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

update... i did the face...im changing him to bebi goku... well here it is...

*crits are welcome but its my first pbp so dont be too harsh*

 

[DaWg]

Are those his actual eyes? I know Bebi's eyes looked nothing like that.... It looks ok other than that except the mouth and teeth bug me, if hes gonna have teeth visible, dont make em 2 white bars.

 

[.:RvD:.]

Not bad , need imporivg thought , arms just look like tweeked cylinders
just make them pbp and it l look good

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

im remaking the body... and bebi goku is not a real character by the way.. its just somn i thoughtve coming out with

 

[The Sourcerer]

that looks good... the mouth is good but its just two white bars like Dawg said... dont forget those red things above their eyebrows... the thing bebi vegeta has