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I have some screens of a model i made, but nowhere to postem =/ so anyhelp would be nice

(and im forum impaired)
 
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well guess I helped another....adds you too 32 people

np but for people to crit your model you usually show a left view,right view,front view,and back view
 
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J... good try on your draw over.. not entierly perfect.. I'll give it a go aswell ^_^
 

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as long as i give him the general shape and the right amount of muscles, im happy :)
 
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should make him a little shorter, and the hair should be a littl more foward.the arm muscles could use a little more work.
they seem to be out of proportion.
and the waist line should be a little more bigger.
hmM good job so far tho ;)

peace
 
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k, Ill fix it, (im on different comps and my network is screwy.... so ill proly post updates tomarrow or late tonight.


btw when im done modeling this ... if ne 1 wants to animate / skin this thing feel free..... my "Skill" ends with modeling:devgrin:
 
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here is a draw over.. keep at it.. I like what I'm see being developed...
 
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This model would be great if it weren't for the weird ass muscles, and the funky nose..... Keep at it, and try to fix the arms atleast, cuz noone is gonna notice the nose in game anyways.
 
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ehehe... :) well personally i like the muscles but, if their that wrong ill changeem,


I made the entire model with extrusion, thats why its so .... oddd... heh. i think im gonna restart from the neck down ... i messed him all up lol, thanx for the draw over, that'll help alot!

(i made this model in an hour so.. i might be done by tomarrow,

this is my first gohan model, and first time ive tried keeping the poly's low. this gohan is at 950 triangles


ill post recreation in the morning
 
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dont redo it all, just look at x's draw over and redo the arms
 
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ok last post b4 bed ...
http://www.villagephotos.com/viewpubimage.asp?id_=2151715
i tried to fix his arms .. i think they are more unporportional now(his head looks a bit small...easy fix), but the shape is better, hes a little shorter, and his chin was narrowed a bit, and i added some face detail.. Plus i set up all the instancing crap ... so i have no serious problems


ok more updates tomarrow, gnite
 
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He looks more like brolly then gohan.
 
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Good start, kinda flat chest and weird arm muscles. Looks more like brolli then gohan=> hiar and face.
 
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try to stick to the draw over.. and the arms have improved on that last render u make.. but got to fix up the boooooody ^_^

nice work
 

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