Vegetto WIP

[PiXel]

simple drawover just for the size?

at all the Thumb is very small and the middle finger needs to get bigger.. also the hand side at the lil finger needs to get abit pulled out:

 

[Super Veggeto]

final render, fixed most of the things that were pointed out here, thanks =]
ill have him skinmapped soon and then ill start on the cell shaded skin =D
thats all for now :smile:

 

[PiXel]

Yeh now it looks: AMAZING XD

 

[ReCkOninG of FirE]

just pwness =) GJ, cant wait to see skin

do realistic one first =P!

 

[Hamppu]

it sure does look amazing now! damn great job man! *waits for tehh skins to it!!!*

 

[Adaptus]

Looking most excellent. :yes:

 

[movento]

IMO his hair looks to much like mystic gohan instead of veggeto,but only in the front view,the side view is perfect.

 

[-Nataku-]

just awsome! cant wait to see the cell shaded skin =]

 

[Growler]

final render, fixed most of the things that were pointed out here, thanks =]
ill have him skinmapped soon and then ill start on the cell shaded skin =D
thats all for now :smile:

you said you weren't going to cel-shade this time

 

[Grampz]

well if john kerry can flip flop why can't SV(uh oh gunna start a debate) lol

but all jokes aside wonderful job man... u get better and better...every time

 

[TwisteR]

Ok, here is what I think.

Front/Back
Hair looks too short, arms look a little too buff and the neck looks a little thick.

Side:
Arms look kinda scrawny.

 

[Super Veggeto]

you said you weren't going to cel-shade this time

i did ;P hehe but yeah, i changed my mind. im a cell shaded freak...i cant help it ='D

well if john kerry can flip flop why can't SV(uh oh gunna start a debate) lol

but all jokes aside wonderful job man... u get better and better...every time

thanks man =D

Ok, here is what I think.

Front/Back
Hair looks too short, arms look a little too buff and the neck looks a little thick.

Side:
Arms look kinda scrawny.

indeed you are right... =/ damn...some people say scale it up..some say scale it down heh...but ill do it right this time, ill make the arms less wide from the front view, i think from the side they look ok, maybe make them wider...just a tad.
ill tweak the neck too, i see there is something weird there...
and about the hair...
the hair...
well, i've tried changing the front before, but then it ****ed up the side =/ it's hard to balance it atm...
ill see what i can do...im not sure ill change it completly but ill try.

thanks =D im skinning the face atm, updates soon.

 

[--ChaoS--]

very nice job as allways and from the front the arms are buffed too much or from the side they are too thick or both anyway nice job

(offtopic:are you israeli?)

 

[Super Veggeto]

yes ill fix some things here and there.

(offtopic:are you israeli?)

indeed i am. why?

 

[Green Wolfos]

My god! That model is great! I have no crits! Great job, man!

 

[Denz]

look it from the side view...
his neck is toooo fat (even if you were following that reference)

maybe (at the point where blue, orange and skin connects) pull it more to the front
it will look better (if you aim for perfection )

overall it looks great... keep it comin'

 

[dor]

the bots on the front view not so good in the first line its need to be yashar

 

[Ky]

Man that model is looking sexy as hell,you are realy good at doing the veggeto models good job,bro u never seize to amaze me.

 

[Super Veggeto]

My god! That model is great! I have no crits! Great job, man!

Man that model is looking sexy as hell,you are realy good at doing the veggeto models good job,bro u never seize to amaze me.

thanks guys =D

the bots on the front view not so good in the first line its need to be yashar

heh, i think you can write in hebrew too, but you need to write in english aswell =P
i understand what you mean, but it's the folds that make it look like this, actually from behind them it's strait.

מה שהתכוונתי זה שיש קפלים של המכנס, בגלל זה זה לא נראה ישר אבל זה ישר מאחוריהם.

look it from the side view...
his neck is toooo fat (even if you were following that reference)

maybe (at the point where blue, orange and skin connects) pull it more to the front
it will look better (if you aim for perfection )

overall it looks great... keep it comin'

yup, ill fix that too, ive noticed a few flaws =P usualy it takes me a day or two to notice them.
anyway, ill fix those, but i guess ill be too lazy to post a picture of those minor fixes, so ill probably post the skin progress and you'll see the changes along the way.

i started on the skin =D almost finished with the head, then ill post a render of it.
till then... :smile: thanks for the comments =D

 

[Almighty_Gir]

SV: i know your aware of our english rules. so if your to write any hebrew (it is right?) then you must post the translation also.

מה שהתכוונתי זה שיש קפלים של המכנס, בגלל זה זה לא נראה ישר אבל זה ישר מאחוריהם
=i understand what you mean, but it's the folds that make it look like this, actually from behind them it's strait?

and im looking forward to seeing the head =]