Like i said before, it does look teh secks D:, its the best kakashi i've seen so far but I have to say i do agree with sadner, i dont mean its all wrong, just there are some issues with the eyes and the nose, amongst other things . The problem is, with the animated eyes it's gonna be hard to get any anime character to look correct, im suprrised you pulled it off with naruto tbh, though it was at the price of teh eye lashes D:
Okay, first off, i think if you've been using a character sheet made for, or from the anime, okay maybe it looks good and is usable, but the thing with anything not drawn by the original artist is it will lack consistancy with other images, all images will mimic the original. This is why i always prefer using manga as a reference, there is only one artist, who gets a lot more time to put more effort/quality into his work who coincidently is the creator of the character which in my eyes means his drawings will always be the most acurate/consistant.... anyways >_<
I gots a drawover for ya:
My crits would be that his eyes need to be smaller verically and longer horizontally, hopefully if done correctly, this'll make the nose look less big, though i must say, his nose is rather too wide. The brow is also a little too smooth for kakashi, except for when kakashi is relaxed or being flipant. The biggest crit of all is the size of the jaw, this is why i refered to what reference's you use earlier, something ive noticed about the anime is that the face sometimes become rather elongated vertically, however in the manga the faces in naruto are much more round, this is also the only crit i have about your naruto as well, that his head isnt as round as it should be, in my personal opinion. Anyway, as i was saying, i think the jaw should be moved up, I dont know what it looks like from the side, but i tried to illustrate the fact that there should be clearly visible the formation of lips under his mask too, it more to do with the profile/side view though, because the contours can be skinned for other angles. Oh and, as for the forehead protector, when drawing kakashi (like most of the naruto characters actually), you must always line up the edges of the metal on the forehead protector with the end of their sideburns D: no biggie though, it might not be possible in 3d without getting some funky skull shape, however i do think the band should get thinner at the back than currently, when you tie something in a knot it has to converge together at a point, though atm you might be making it so he can scrotate it for his sharingan and such D:
Meh, i usually dont crit your models so much Enix, but i felt like you needed to know exactly what i was thinking on this one, good luck with the rest, i know you'll make him secksy D:
Btw, if you're gonna edit the jawline like i have in the drawover, you'll have to rescale the head a little to make it fit in proportion again.