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a) because it's Gohan, or Goten, or Trunks (eeh! Which one is it) and not Vegeta you lose 2 points

b) because I can't tell which one it is, you lose three points.

c) because it's blue, you gain 1 point

:D j/k. I'll minus the first one, giving you 8 points outta ten.
 
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wow thats mush better than i could ever do!
8/10:yes:
 
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I'm not sure about using 3 different fonts but it's still awesome :) :yes:
 
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Yea, the 3 fonts is kinda a downer. And in the top right corner his hair is a diff color. But other that that it is nice. and it IS gohan.
 
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The layout is pretty good, the colors are kind of an assault on the eyes, but not bad. Mewtwo is 100% right on the font thing. Unless you have a whole lot of text, you shouldn't need more that 2. In this case I think you'd be even better off staying with one family of type. Like Futura, Univers, or MicroGamma. I also think the "AKA" thing is a little odd. If you're attached to it no big deal, but I think it would be better if maybe you chose one name as a title and used the other as a sub-title.
 

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Originally posted by eMp-5
it's hard to rate something

should I rate u as just any photoshop user of some1 who's new to photoshop? I could say it's great, and give u 10/10. There's some things though, like using too much fonts, it's too emtpy for my taste, not that I don't like plain pics.. no.. I won't comment u on the style, but it's just to empty, it might be intended but it doesn't look good, I also don't like what u did with the gohan pic.

It's not bad, seriously it's quite actually, it's just that there are some things u really could imrpove on it, and what u should work on, but that's with pretty much every artist so no big deal, I'm giving it 6.5 out of ten, it's good but it just needs some improvements

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1/10......................JK JKJK ahahha
9/10
 
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thanks guys heres a diff. one please rate domino and nazgul i learn a lot from what u guys say

 
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It looks weird. All those weird koleidascope (darn my bad spelling!) thingies. I liked the other one better, but I can tell it's Gohan in this one. I still give it 8.
 
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Your colors are very assaulting..you should add more tones and such, add variety -- all that pattern in blue really hurts the eyes.

I take it your favorite color is blue?? But in any case, you should probably work on editing the backgrounds and maybe a little motion blurs or something to add Depth. Maybe on the text you should add a BLACK border around it. If your going for the ICY look, then black is a good color.. But I kinda do like how you altered the hue and saturation of your gohan in pic #1..

Pic #2 is just...blah :p

But if your a newbie, thats insanely good and you should probably keep it up. If your intermediate, you need work. If your a advanced user, LAY OFF THE TUTORIALS.

The only thing I dislike about the newer generation of computer artists is they lack creativity. No differencies in the tutorials..just color changes and topic changes..

*shrug* I score it a 7/10..fairly good but a little on the eyes and repititive patterns.

Keep up the good work.
 
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i like icy things and that is no tutorial not 1 of it i made the whole thing kinda just popped out while i played with it.
please if nazghl or ryuko would be my teacher for like 2 days ill appreciate it
 

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Originally posted by eMp-5
i like icy things and that is no tutorial not 1 of it i made the whole thing kinda just popped out while i played with it.
please if nazghl or ryuko would be my teacher for like 2 days ill appreciate it
thank u so much for my mentioning my name :)

I'm always forgotten :(

check my portfolio (in my sig) for contact

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Originally posted by eMp-5
thanks guys heres a diff. one please rate domino and nazgul i learn a lot from what u guys say


Looks pretty good, but I don't like the background at all, change it to something else and it will be far better.
 
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Originally posted by eMp-5
i like icy things and that is no tutorial not 1 of it i made the whole thing kinda just popped out while i played with it.
please if nazghl or ryuko would be my teacher for like 2 days ill appreciate it
Hehe never said you did tutorials, I was assuming your fairly new, but if your advanced and have done it for a year, and still use tutorials, you should lay off the tutorials :p but that wasnt directed to you...

Anyway, the picture is quite good, just add depth with the text and you have a very good picture as a sample.. or maybe edit it in the future and you can actually get quite good results from such things.


The pic you posted a little later on in this thread, is very good.. hats off to you --

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I liked 2 of the fonts you used for the sig, cept that one down at the bottom in the middle, it blows..

I like the blue glow(ish) color you used too.

In all I'd give it a strong 8/10 :)
 

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