first wallpaper

[Spiritfire]

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i got bored so i made it i know theres some problems with it but tell me what you think please
and no this isnt the full size
crits plz

 

[mr. roshi]

keep it that size, call it a "new graphic i made" and i like it

 

[Optimus Prime]

Hmm, it's good for a first. There doesn't seem to be a main focal point, since nothing really grabbed my attention. Maybe the spray things in the corners.

 

[GhostfaceKillah]

Too symmetrical for me.

 

[Spiritfire]

i was gonna do somthing similar to what naz did on enlightment but i screwed up and relized i liked it the way it was

 

[Marauder]

the bg and gfx are nice, but not my style...

 

[Wangster]

its verry nice, but i have to agree with optimus prime, but, there is a little thing in the middle right side, that had my eyes for a sec.

 

[greentaco]

There's no real focal point to me, other than the little blurb that Wangster was talking about. Those crystals in the corner seem very out of place to me, and conflict a lot with other things.

 

[Spiritfire]

it looks much worse without the spikes, i'm gonna make them smaller so they dont cross as much, thats somthing i didnt like, and i'll try to add some more focal point thing

 

[Lone Wolf]

Me agree with GFK... Too symetrical ... but Me still like

 

[Spiritfire]

my next version will have a bit more of a focal point, and it will be better cause uh..yeah

 

[GhostfaceKillah]

WP's need a focal point, or else it's just too plain.

PS: You did this in Photoshop right? Because if you did I think I've used that crystal tutorial too.

 

[Spiritfire]

i did the crystals in photoshop using the extrusion filter and lens flare, the new one has a focal point but is it ok if its in a cornerror will it look like crap? and now its full size too

 

[greentaco]

No way. Everything has to look good if I'm going to use it.

 

[Spiritfire]

no way mean yes leave it there or dont put it there?
http://webpages.charter.net/gsmith2001/uselessresponse/wp3.jpg
version 2.0 is done, i decided to go on my own judgement and redo the backround. its a big picture so i'm not gonna link it tell me what you think better/worse?

 

[greentaco]

It's better, but it still needs work. If you look, there's an area in the middle where the crystals just cut off. That looks horrible IMO. Everything should blend with the rest of the piece.

 

[Marauder]

umm, u can c where u cut the spikes :\

 

[Spiritfire]

yeah i just relized that, it does look weird, i'll see what i can do to fix it