Hey, I like it, but maybe you should consider the black highlights in the hair, and maybe red highlights in the black hair ,I think it might look neat, also try your best to add shading effects on the pants, it has to look real now. I think its pretty damn cool, I may download when it comes out. And dont forget the shading effects!
omg you actually used my idea I feel so specail. And try making the suit all black just to see how it looks, if you dont like it change it back to dark red. Like I said, I think it looks great.