ZEQ II Teen Gohan

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Follow Gimps drawover. Even if you are going for a cartoon style, thats how the cartoons were drawn. Yours is missing some major details, and the arm skin is not very good. Fix it.
 
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i thnk the models are great , about 1000x beta than the esf gohan for sure lol :cool:
 
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hmmmm you should skin it like Gimp´s drawover...
Its skin-drawover is also "cartoonish" and would look very very well cellshaded...
Follow his drawover and your team will love you :p

And here another drawover for helping you :yes:

 
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thanks kreshi, i fixed it ^_^
atm im fixing alot of stuff, hair is better, pants are better and arms skin/model has been tweaked aswell...
next update ill show might be the final thing :p
 
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Holy crap SV...that is one sw33t gohan you´ve got there....damn...now i must play ZEQ2 hehe

btw> what ever happend to that adult gohan you were doing? coz i loved him ;)

goodjob keep it up
 
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on the chest you dont need to have those little slashes by the center part because a kid isnt ognna have those
and to kreshi, the shoulder bicep is called a deltoid, i think thats the spelling
 
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well....im done!
i've finished with ssj and non-ssj gohan and im very very pleased with the results :)
hope you are too =P
anyway, now im working on ssj2 which is now 40% finished so stay tuned for updates ^_^

 

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I have to crits. At the end of the very big spike to the right of gohans hair, select the vertex at the tip and move it up a little. Then take the vertex that is directly right of that and move it down a smidge. If you dont understand what i mean, tell me and ill make a drawover.
 
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MP said:
Well, looks like gohan to me. Are you going to have to make a realistic version also?
yup, planning to, maby after ill finish ssj2 gohan

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I have to crits. At the end of the very big spike to the right of gohans hair, select the vertex at the tip and move it up a little. Then take the vertex that is directly right of that and move it down a smidge. If you dont understand what i mean, tell me and ill make a drawover
yup, i noticed it too :p thanks for reminding me
 
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Among one of the best gohan models ive seen cant wait for the ssj2 version,Maybe we could get one in gokus outfit
 
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here ya go:





i might do one version with goku's gi, not sure
anyways the model is done, so no need to crit
if you wanna see more pics go to zeq2 ;)
 
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You did a very good job on those, really nice. I am sure ZEQII is proud. :)
 
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lookin good, but where's his nose o_O..... and the hands look a little thin to me, thicken them up a little imo, also bring his hairline down a little, and his eyebrows shouldnt get so close in the middle, they shouldnt stretch too far over the actual eye and they should curve downwards at the ends. i'd also make the mouth a little bit wider, but not too much. anyways nice model ;)

ooh, forgot, the deltoids (arm muscles) should take shape from the bicep, not the other way round, it must curve around it... and contrary to kreshi's drawover, there should be a little gap where the biceps join the arm, but its hard to see, because the pectorials should join at the bottom of the deltoid which makes it look like there is no gap
 
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the ssj2 is wrong just to let you know. SSJ2 everything increases, and you get taller.
 
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i love those models, i only hav one crit for the super saiyan 2 model = tha face looks weird to meh but yea they rock good job !!
 

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