crackerjack your model's skin is too tanned ofcourse .
he's model's skin is too tanned of course ? what do you mean by that?
for my taste crackerjack you should try this :
-make the chin area wider
-as it comes to the eyes follow shinjo drawover
-same for the mask, round it abit
-make some rear parts of hair, visible in the rear head area ( like in shinjo drawover)
- make the eyes a bit closed,
- also the dot in the sharingan seems to be a bit oversized
- eyebrows are too thick
- round he's metal protector a bit
-fix the scar a bit ( its too thick )
- the side view realy bugs me, try to catch a good ref and play with it.
- the skin in the side view, is a bit messed, try to move some polys to match it better ( should be easy to fix )
- Highlight the nose area on the mask, just like in the show
The skin took the model in a place diferent then i expected ^_^"
but try to fix those things and your back in the track ^_~