Kakashi WIP

[Mirai_no_Trunks]

crackerjack your model's skin is too tanned ofcourse .

 

[-Nataku-]

crackerjack your model's skin is too tanned ofcourse .

he's model's skin is too tanned of course ? what do you mean by that?

for my taste crackerjack you should try this :

-make the chin area wider
-as it comes to the eyes follow shinjo drawover
-same for the mask, round it abit
-make some rear parts of hair, visible in the rear head area ( like in shinjo drawover)
- make the eyes a bit closed,
- also the dot in the sharingan seems to be a bit oversized
- eyebrows are too thick
- round he's metal protector a bit
-fix the scar a bit ( its too thick )
- the side view realy bugs me, try to catch a good ref and play with it.
- the skin in the side view, is a bit messed, try to move some polys to match it better ( should be easy to fix )
- Highlight the nose area on the mask, just like in the show

The skin took the model in a place diferent then i expected ^_^"

but try to fix those things and your back in the track ^_~

 

[Element4q2]

Did a lil edit to it in photoshop to show you what you should fix. =)

Apologies for the scrappy edit...a bit strapped for time atm.



Not nearly 100% but a step in the right direction

 

[CrackerJack]

Almost everything you guys said is pretty fixable. Ill update later tonight.

The only thing that might be a problem is fixing the sides. I mapped the side horribly (I might redo it) but its kinda hard to work with.

 

[Super Veggeto]

Here's my drawover:

 

[LSSJ-Goku]

nice nice ... but still didnt anone anserw on my question ? "Where do u play with naruto models ?"

 

[CrackerJack]

Ok.. fixes:

-Edited hair on the side and in the back
-Change hair color
-Smaller eyes
-Smaller scar
-Rounded mask
-Made eyes more of that half closed look
-Completely redid headband for the 3rd time
-Highlighted nose more
-Raised ears a little
-Made hair go to the right more
-Smaller eyebrowns

Im gonna work on raising the eyes and the mask more

 

[Andy011]

About the eyes... I think they're a bit too sinked in the face.

 

[CrackerJack]

... uh..

Eh?

No really sure what you mean by there too skinned into the face

 

[Super Veggeto]

He meant sinked, not skinned ^^;
They are too pushed back/inwards, I think thats what he meant.

 

[imkongkong]

Here's my drawover:

follow this! sex

 

[Mobius ^^]

I must conqur with KoNgeh

Looking nice so far!


*offtopic* btw, whatever happened to that Naruto model you were making?

 

[CrackerJack]

I said it in the 1st post.

I lost it, its gone off my comp >_<

edit*

Btw, I dunno why but like an idiot i messed up the b4 and after.. The before is the right and after is the left XD Woops

Played around with the map and moved the mask.

Wow, if anyone else ever tried to skin this they would be so confushed with the face map XD

 

[acira]

can we see him full size

 

[Vegeta]

The skin is beautiful, but from what I see, the head closes in too thin at the bottom (the whole head looks little, and not matured), and the hair's off by a lot. Follow SV's ref.

 

[CrackerJack]

Not dead, just been a little busy. Did this today. I personally liked how it turned out

 

[Barney]

seeing that i'm watching naruto right now...the area between the mask and his forehead protector is a lot smaller and his hair should be a but more angled, but everything else looks great...when you finish the body you should add one of jiraiya's books too

 

[-Nataku-]

hmm, you didint fixed the head yet, and your going for the lower part already ? : P heh, put the eyes higher, and stretch them in the side view.
the forhead protector skn, looks un narutish : P its too dirty/scratched for my taste

points at sv's drawover*

fix the blending on the lower part skn,

i belive that you mapped it in a front/rear way, without welding the edges together, this resulted with such a blending error. If it was with a cell shaded skin it eint a bigger problem but here... it dosent look right : P, so you might wanna fixie that to get better results. Im liking it overall, just make some fixes
^_~

 

[Zabuza2k]

hmm is that not so orginal ??

 

[Kasey]

Where his lovehandles (his sides right above his waist) are it makes it look like his fat. It should be moved in a little bit and where his waist is and pants are about to start it looks like his jacket just pokes out really far.
Make it a little more like that. But not pushed in as much as the one in the pic. (I just suck at it) Just so you get what I was trying to say.