Kakashi WIP

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If I could make some pretty renders for u guys i would XD

Ill try to get some better pics up later.

Well, anyway im still tweaking the hair, its a little to straight up, im trying to make it go more the right.

Didnt color the polys for his mask cause i got lazy..


Just started modeling again. I was gonna finish that naruto i had a while ago, but I lost it. Not a big deal, I wanted to start kakashi anyway.
 
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Looking pretty good so far CJ.

Will reserve comment on the hair until you've finished tweaking. Other than that i'd suggest shortening the length of his toes or rather extending the coverage of the shoes, thinning out the ankles and reminding you not to forget the flappy shoulder pad type parts.

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The head angle is a little off but this should help :)
 
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ok the kakashi is very good but i have a question are you makeing him just a model or makeing for ESF game model ???:rolleyes:
 

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ok the kakashi is very good but i have a question are you makeing him just a model or makeing for ESF game model ???:rolleyes:
And exactly HOW does Kakashi fit into a DragonballZ mod?
 
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Maybe.. I might put it into esf, but dont get your hopes up XD

Thanks for the drawover element :D The hair is making progress though :D

Yeah, the little flap things on the shoulder is just gonna be skinned on. SOmehow (Probably cause of teh hands, toes and his belt area) its kinda high poly so I decided not to model it on.

I built shoulders/elbows/knees on this, and could put it ingame, but we will see. Ill probably put it into TS though.
 
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And exactly HOW does Kakashi fit into a DragonballZ mod?
no where but i thing it's good whit outer(sorry for my english) things
ps good model but the hair isint turnig the right way:laff:
 
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i forget if milkshape has a soft-selection tool or not,

but if so, you could probably just select the tips of the hair and drag it over without having to alter the middle verts
 
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looks good ;) btw where are ya playing with naruto models ???
 
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not bad not bad = ] if you could post a wire of the face that would be great,
i think you got a little mess near the eyebrows area, or maybe those are just funky random shadows, dunno.

post that wire, and keep the progress up, dunno maybe he will have a cell shaded skn 1 day ; D
 
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arms are to longa imo.
and i would also say the feet look wierd + you forgot the pouch on his as$ :p and dude for the love of gode model come come paradise to go along with him for the idle stance XD
 
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The feet were fixed already, youll see in my next update.

The amrs, ill shorten them and see how they look.

The pouch/bag on his leg are there, but they were hidden when I took the SS. They will be in my next update :D.

And yes, I was planning on making come come paradise :D

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Some skinning update
 
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Looks nice man.
Few crits:

Hair looks too high and a bit bigger than it needs to be
Eyes are huge
Ear are too low, plus the area itself looks slacked off (noticed the same on your Naruto)
Headband is a bit too high. The eyebrows should hardly be visible, plus the skin looks low quality on it compared to the rest.
Pecks/neck area looks DBZ-ish (not very Kakashi like, basically)
Headband's straps shape on the back is wrong, should have a sharp end.

Basically the overall feeling I'm getting from the model is a kid Kakashi.
Keep it up though, looking forward to seeing it finished. ;]
 
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Fixed almost everthing I think, except the neck. Im working on that

update again tommorow with chest skin I hope
 
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Did a lil edit to it in photoshop to show you what you should fix. =)

 
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I think that kakashi's eyes should be half-closed.
Here is what i mean:


EDIT:
Damn two minutes too late.
 
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the eyes and eyebrowns

and a good look of the hair
i like the way you made sharingan :) but the eyes must be the same size and the scar thiner
 

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