Gohan - Back and ass kickin' model ;D

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actually nice gohan
there is one thing bad and that are the colors
the bleu should be darker
the black hair 2
and the ssj hair 2
or is it normal with the pictures ?
 
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looks good,but i think the eyes are a bit to big.can you post some wires?@the collector,the colors will be fixed when the model gets a texture.
 
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for some reason it looks like charlie sheen to me >_<
 
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Been busy this week so at least a lil update ;) I've completly redone arms, made some tweaks to the chest and neck area. I've also made some cool renders (discovered how to operate light in max ;) ) Ohh and a lil update with software from 3ds Max 7 -> 3ds Max 8 !!! :D

Okay here are the renders: (Crits & Comments welcome)



oh and Jayster how's the neck, could you exsplain me (like to a child) what's wrong with it??



Ohhh forgot... Drawovers welcome ;)
 

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lighting seems a bit weird on that render dude, but very good model :D
 
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Okay !!!! Just finished SSJ2 !!!! Pretty good i think :D

And now I'd like to introduce Son Gohan SSJ2: ;)



but seriously guys, there's something i don't like about side view of hairs, can't really say what thou... Mabey you could help:



Crits and rest welcome ;)
 
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first time you didnt ask for "drawovers" in your post.. anyways back of the hair might want to make that go up a little (from side view), front view looks fine
 
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hmm all what bothers me is only the upper arm... the triceps looks very thin.. buff it up.
 
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hey nice model, hair is coooool! but i dont like the part of the hair that is fallin at the forehead! it is small small from top and big from down (if u c what i mean) i tried to make a drawover but i donno how to post an image!! the eyes r also big, i think but not bad!! every other thing is GREAT!! love it.
 
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his hair is 2 downwoars , pls do the hair more sharp , and more upwords



EDIT : GOhan's hair is JUST a little more LITTLE than his HEAD



that means the hair is too tiny :D


EDIT 2 : Black means that the top spikes shoud reach ther , red is the 2nd 1s
 
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OMG !!! I can't bealive this !!! I've finally finished !!!

Well guys, after a verrrryyyyyy long time I think that I've finally finished modelling :D :D :D All 4 forms are completed thanks to you guys, yours crits, comments and even drawovers ;) So here are the renders:



and this one:



I hope there is no need this time for crits, comments and drawovers, huh? ;)

Once again thank you all guys !!!!

EDIT: You've got to love the ssj2 and mystic hairs ;)
 
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Ravven said:
What about the rest?? ;) Body, clothes, muscles?? :)

I just don't have idea what are you talking about? O_O Could you make for me drawover?? Could you search for gohan pics and than show me the diffrence?? ;)
Sorry man, only just got your message.

The rest of the model is ass-kickin', GJ!

As far the hair, it seems better, I can't draw 'drawovers' but the hair is looking good atm, maybe someone else could try explaining?

GJ! :D
 

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nice :D one crit tho. in mystic Gohan didn't have hair like that, from what I remember his hair wasn't much different from when he was normal exept his bang was slightly bigger

 
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CrackerJack said:
Flat shades would be most helpful
Whats that??

-fortnox- Really ?? :D from what I remember hairs were diffrent from normal and something alike ssj2, but i can be wrong ;)
 
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Actually I think Mystic and SSJ2 hair is identical except for color. It doesn't really matter which side the bang hangs as it changes a few times during his fight with Super Buu anyway. You could increase its length (for Mystic and SSJ2) so it hangs down just past his eye though.

Looking good, can't wait to see a skin.
 
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how about makin gohans ssj2 hair yellow glow and mystics white glow
 
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flatshade = facets and highlights in ur max

i saw most of your model in max, you really need to post wires dude, you've wasted a bit and some can be cleaned up, the proportions is good i'll give you that though :p
 
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Hi im making a 3d massively multiplayer online action(a bit of rpg) game like dragonballz. Your model is very good and would suit the game im making, so i want you to be a 3d modeller for my game please. my email is [email protected] add me or email me please.

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