yes he does look a tad bit crosseyed, i dunno how you cant see i man,
anywho this is shaping up pretty well, but theres a few (well, not really a few)things that bug me,
the veins are good and all but that one that goes vertical up the bicep just looks wrong, itd probly look better iwth that taken out completely,
and the vein that runs the length of the arms should fade away as it nears the armpit,
the muscles on the shin just suddenly jut to the sides, and it looks pretty bad, though the muscles on teh top of the legs look just fine, (though it could use a lil something at the edge of the tights, like shadow or somethin , something that makes the tights not look skin tight,)
the lil gold armor segments on the wrist and ankles need a more definitive edge to them at the ends of them,
the creases in the golden parts of the armor practically are are lighter or darker than another, it really REALL stands out on the armor hangin on his crotch,
the far ends of the eyebrows have a tiny lil bit of stretching or sumthin has a strange angle right at the ends,
the tail around the waist, make it more hair like, it looks like a leather strap right now,
the feet look too plain, since your modelling the muscles through the top part of the boots, you might as hell leave traces of the feet inside the boots, like very slight indentions or protrusions, like the ankles, or sumthin,
and last but not least the skin thingie right above his eyebrow looks off, dunno what exactly it is about it, but it looks more like a top end of someones buttcheeks right now,
when you showed it to me on aim you didnt have near this much done so i didnt have as much to crit about,