Vector WIP

[Growler]

2nd Vector [WIP].. got the hang of the necessary PEN tool

C+C

 

[Mr.Lukyas]

I think it's still too early for crits. Send us some updates and U'll get crits.

 

[-Origin]

Looking good.







Oh, and the vector is good too. Just need to lighten the skin colour a bit.

 

[Growler]

Finally got back to working on it, made some progress

 

[LionHeart]

Looks good, can't wait to see it when it's done xD

 

[Pieter Paul Rubens]

Be less harsh on the skintones.. The hard transitions kinda destroy it for me.

 

[Skiwan]

Yeah i must say, the skintone is much too contrasted, make it a bit more subtle. I'd also reconsider the amount of detail on the hand, from the picture it's almost flat, the detail you've included doesnt look simple enough.

 

[Growler]

Update- Im having trouble with her ("her") left eye

 

[Growler]

sorry to bump this, but Id like some replies

 

[kam!]

IMO you try to match the picture too much. You try to match every shade of colour that's in the pic. (at least it looks like it)
I'd try to use 3 shades max (normal colour, highlight and shadow), that way it would look much cleaner.
Some parts also seem traced too jaggy (like the hair that falls on the arm).
Altogether I'd try to not trace the really tiny bits. Trace only parts/colours that have a certain size, and ignore smaller bits.

 

[Growler]

I was going more for vexel style actually.. but I guess im not having luck with it... so maybe ill go with a straight vector

 

[Growler]

Started something new