Super Vegeta WIP

[Orbit]

Head WIP:



C&C are welcome

 

[movento]

not bad.there's something wrong with it but i cant put my finger on it.i think it is because his face is to stretched from the side view.keep us updated :smile:

 

[CrackerJack]

Not bad man, nice job so far. I dunno if I would model the mouth like that though, try modeling a closed mouth.

 

[Orbit]

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I think there's a prob with the chin. Tell me what you think.

 

[jp]

Is it me or is his nose to long?

Anyways, good start, I myself think it is difficult making a good head.

 

[Growler]

 

[Jedi Vegeta]

oooh i like it..Couldnt find many references but these might help

 

[Orbit]

I spent hours trying to make it look good, and that's what I came up with :/



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Can anyone give me specific help/tips or should I move on?

 

[Vegeta]

That's a good start Orbit... though I suggest you get rid of that smile, it's too large - almost like the Joker's.

 

[Almighty_Gir]

not only is that a bad drawover, but you gave him a goatee on his friggin FOREHEAD!

 

[Orbit]

Update:


Got rid of the crappy smile. The chin still bothers me though.

 

[Mr. Phonso]

the chin is too pointy from the side, thats why it looks weird

 

[Orbit]

the chin is too pointy from the side, thats why it looks weird

I fixed it:

Cya tomorrow :tired:. Tell me what you think

 

[Cold Steel]

Looks pretty accurate to me. Is this one of your first models ?

 

[Growler]

I SAY, PPPPPAHHHYEAHHH. Nice work man. Milkshape will soon take over the world... MUhahahaha... not...

 

[Mr. Phonso]

looks much better now, just get rid of that vertice over the eyebrow

 

[Jedi Vegeta]

looking good. got another reference

 

[movento]

i really like it.good luck on the rest of his hair.my crit is that you move the lips forward so they match your ref

 

[Orbit]

Got rid of those vertice and moved the mouth a bit (just like u said ). Btw that's a pretty good ref Jedi.
I'm really happy with the face now. Tell me what you think.

 

[Almighty_Gir]

wow dude thats really taking shape, nice and low poly too!

one thing you will learn at some point though, is that you dont always follow your reference 100%. this is the case with the neck. youve modeled it to the ref, which is great. however, you should start the neck a little lower than the ear, it looks a little weird on the model right now

edit: also, you should bring his face forward, so his chin is further from his neck, cos atm he wouldnt be able to breathe, let alone fight..