Raditz - The untold story

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I like your style. I would like an Story about Gohan after the cell games of an alternate version were he kept on Training and were Future Trunks didnt went into his timeline.
SSJ2 Gohan and Future Trunks <3
But some story were could really have been in the anime.
 
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Hmmm.... I like the style. Maybe you should submit some of your stuff for www.dragonball-multiverse.com and you might get a chance to do one of the Alternate Timeline's Specials.
 
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LOL. Dude this is pretty good. I would leave the story as is. It's funny.

Style is ok. I might try making raditz crying more detailed. Kind of like a Ren and Stimpy style.

+1 for the turles inclusion. Good stuff man
 

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