new Vegeta WIP

[CrackerJack]

@Slim: lol
Your right.

I told you my crits on am.

 

[Almighty_Gir]

i think in the side view, his arms need either to be further foreward, or his shoulders to be wider, because all pics of vegeta show his shoulders to be almost as broad as his neck, you get what i mean?

 

[DJ-Ready]

the shoulders look a bit skinny in the side view ... but its still great man

 

[Warbandit]

to say it with cjs words: *killed* look at the back, its just out of position and that screws up the whole model

as for the skinning its done nicely though i have to agree the biceps isnt placed properly

yes yes i quite agree. u need to fix that. those arms from a side view look really bad. REALLY REALLY bad. the size is what im noticing but i think its the way they are placed. or something. THE SIDE VIEW JUST REALLY BUGS ME!
the skin pwns.

 

[dynamic`]

the side view is really bad,
the neck looks too far down and forward
the shirt looks extremely thick
the arms and hands look very skinny so try to bulk them up
and is this vegeta a hunchback?

 

[CrackerJack]

 

[TwisteR]

his arms look a little thin from the side.

 

[imkongkong]

the shoulders should be as wide as the neck

you also made his shoulders and back too blocked and too far back.. look at the picture above, he looks hunched back.. the shirt should line up with his neck.. u should let more of his chest show.. it looks like he's wearing a v neck shirt... maybe try modeling the body first, then add the clothes on.. u'll see what i mean by him lookin hunched back

 

[KelesK]

well its looking good atm, his torso looks a little long tho

 

[Optimus Prime]

His chest looks too small, and from the side view looks more like a female's chest than a males.

 

[Super Veggeto]

wow, how long have i been gone? heh thanks alot for the crits..
now ill try to follow:

BUUUUT ur biceps are not correct

you right, fixed

the Vegeta in EEA...is that yours?QUOTE]
yup

can you texture the hair a bit more?

i think the hair texture for both normal and ssj are fine and i like them

you made it in max 6? not bad u use box modeling?

no i use ms3d, and i model pbp, with some cylinders using

The only crit i have is that i think the chest sticks out to far

yup, fixed

whats the polycount???

2362, it's alot but i can try and lower it down at the end

Alot of burn on the arms....i see ur using dark *coughts* tones...

i didnt used burn/dodge/smudge etc...i used brushes for the muscles, and i like the colore tone, dunno if ill change it

i think in the side view, his arms need either to be further foreward, or his shoulders to be wider, because all pics of vegeta show his shoulders to be almost as broad as his neck, you get what i mean?

yup, fixed

the shoulders look a bit skinny in the side view

yup yup, fixed ^_^

the side view is really bad,
the neck looks too far down and forward
the shirt looks extremely thick
the arms and hands look very skinny so try to bulk them up
and is this vegeta a hunchback?

thanks for those, ill try to fix them as much as i can

*thanks for the drawover cj

his torso looks a little long tho

yea i can do something about that

His chest looks too small, and from the side view looks more like a female's chest than a males

fixed, i think...

well, sorry if i missed any crits but im not finished fixing them all, i did the most improtant ones first:

fixed the arms
fixed chest
fixed fingers
fixed the back

drawover will be very very helpful ^_^ thanks

 

[Final Vegeta]

GJ!

I find the face&nose perfect to be honest only thing that looks weird from the side view is (the one you already saw) and that the arms seem abit small?

edit: arf you fixed the arms already my bad @_o

 

[Hobomaster]

lol man boobs
btw i think u should make his ass stick out a tad more

 

[KelesK]

i still think the legs are too short, it looks really weird it might just be the angle becase from the side it doesnt look so bad

 

[PsychoUSJ]

remember^^
Vegeta is a small guy
a little Fight Midget
@topic:teh model looks nice the way it is,but the SSJ hair is not really good form the colour...it should be a bit blonder

 

[CrackerJack]

fix the head man, do i like i showed you.

 

[Cold Steel]

His crotch is too low, lift it, and the body will be flawless.

 

[sggkgui]

good up date
but the hands are too thin

 

[VeGeTa14]

the skin is ok... but in modeling... hair looks so strange... or not be right with them...

 

[Super Veggeto]

btw i think u should make his ass stick out a tad more

yup, fixed

i still think the legs are too short, it looks really weird it might just be the angle becase from the side it doesnt look so bad

it's the angle cuz the legs are bend backwards, and dont forget, vegeta is a small person, i lifted the crotch up like cold steel pointed up and it looks alot better

fix the head man, do i like i showed you.

ill try to tweak the face a lil, although i think it looks ok, it looks like vegeta to me that is.

but the hands are too thin

yup fixed

the skin is ok... but in modeling... hair looks so strange... or not be right with them...

be more specific, why do you think the hair is strange?

UPDATE:
fixed ass
fixed hands
fixed crotch
fixed legs