Naruto wip

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Looking good CJ. I think those veins or w/e on his neck should be less define, and you need to make the metal piece of the forehead protector a bit longer. Also his pants and sleeves both look a bit too long. It should show a bit of his legs and arms. Look at lutz alec's pic to see what I mean.

-Offtopic- CJ, itsa me, Neon! D=. I heard you got a new SN on AIM, I tried PMin you for it but you never replied =/.
 
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His trapezium is misplaced and way to big for a scrawny ninja
 
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Oh I believe the white thing around his neck is supposed to be the same size all around, whereas yours isn't.
 
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Slight changes
Headband thing is bigger
Muscle on neck is less defined
White collar is all even
slight proportion changes on legs and arms
 
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Another little drawover lol


Also make the eyes bigger, it's starting to look much better =3 like the pants skin man, nice work.
 
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I made minor changes to neck. I know how to fix it, but I dont have time now. Ill do it when i get home.

Rawr kyuubi
 
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Meh, trapezium..basicly SV's drawover.. its really bugging me tbh
 
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His eyebrows are still not fixed. They still need to be higher, mostly connected to the head band. We shouldnt be able to see his forehead at all.
Edit: Like in SV's Drawover...
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Well, ill see what I can do with the face.

Anyone, I have a question. Who should he replace?

I was thinking one of these 3:
Vegeta:
Gallit Gun: Weaker Rasengan?
Final Flash: That red hand beam attack he uses in ep 133 against (spoiler I guess) sasuke
Big Bang: Rasengan?

Krillin:
Kamehameha: Rasengan (get rid of trail)
Disk: That weapon he uses against zabuza.. Forgot what its called

Gohan:
Maskenko: Red Beam?
Kamehameha: Rasengan

I think vegeta would be best, but im not sure.

And if anyone wants to help me out and assign him, I would appreciate that XD cause I cant ;-/

I was never good at that
Ill do some animations if someone can assign him XD
 
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Or maybe i can get bored after you release it and make a plugin for it? I need something to do, im so bored waiting for other people to do their things...
 
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Probably means a plugin that'd add another character to the game.. =/
 
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So anyway, anyone wanna help me out and assaign this? Thats all thats left really... Im gonna make him replace vegeta

And soundpacks/sprites out there for naruto btw? If not, anyone wanna do one?
 
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nice very cool do u think that u would release it? xD

its very cool 10/10
 
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i will release it, i just need someone to assaign it. Then I can make some sprites/anims and release. Hopefully, someone has a soundpack.
 
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Well I'm a experienced Sound manager or whatever you'd like to call it. I'm currently working on a mod called Naruto Ninja Chronicles "www.ninjachronicles.com"

And i would be glad to assist you with this model.
Just say the word and i'll kick into gear ;)
 
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That would be great! Let me just get it assaigned first. Because, I dont want to ask you, then it never gets assigned, and it goes to waist. ^_^ thanks for the offer!

Anyway, and takers yet on assaigning it?
 
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Hehe Np Model looks great btw ^^

Could you post a picture of how it looks now? there's many pics so im not sure which of them is up-to-date

The reason for this request is on some of the pics his head looks too big/round. But maybe you fixed that ;D
 
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I didnt change a lot to the face, because i tampered with the eyebrows and then the whole skin and poly flow was off. I made it wrong, and I messed up. I modeled on teh eyebrows in the wrong position, so it would require me to remodel/map a lot of it. Now, it took forever for me to map the face, so im not really up to it. I may fix it in the future, but right now I just wanna finish this to start my next model, which i started. its posted below naruto.



and my next model (maybe for esf, prob not, naruto def is)
 
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Yeah, Naruto's head is a tad too... i dont know what word to use :p But please do make this naruto model perfect before you move on :D cuase this is one of the best naruto models ive seen so far :D

That other model is kakashi isn't it? ^^
 

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