Naruto wip

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UPDATE* Can someone please help me with assaigning him. I cant ;-/. PLEASE pm me D:


 
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Decent stuff, his kunai-sack thingy is wrong tho, lines should be horizontal.
Oh and make the ends of the bandana long :p They own even if they are not on the pre-gap naruto.

Loose bandana's are always cool!
(jack jazzrabit lol?, Rambo, Turtles, Solid Snake)
 
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Nice start CJ =D the model looks fine to me, proportions are cool and all.
Skin is too early to judge but I can say that what you got on the pants dont exactly match the shirt and like Shady mentioned the lines on his legband should be horizontal.

Thats what I can see for now, you got the head looking nice too =D cant wait to see more :3
 
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the model look's verry good 9/10 good job
 

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CrackerJack said:
The nose looks weird :3, and the metal plate thingy is too small.

Other then it looks good ^^
 
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Don't define the sides fo the nose so much and move his eyes up.
 
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Made adjustments. I personally think it looks loads better
 
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Yeah looks tons better. So far so good, CJ.
 
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Update

Put it on the body
Gonna redo his lil white collar soon, I mapped it wierd.

It will be for esf btw, who should I have it replace.
 
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The headband is supposed be covering most of the brows. The head is also too large, vertical wise.
 
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Yep, agree with Cold.
Made a little (crappy x_x) drawover...but it should point out what to fix


Good improvment though =] it's coming along nicely.
 
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his neck looks likes it is too high, you should lower it...
 
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Its not perfect, but it was an improvement. Ill see what else I can do later with the eyebrows and head.
 
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If ya need this here ya go =D

 
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where is the nose? o_O where is the defination, damn Contrast neeeded! difference between colors, depper shadin lol

and some more straight sharper lines.
 
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Re-mapped and edited a lot of the skin, added feet, and some other stuff..

So yeah, ill work more on head and any other crits later.

 
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Nice, He looks great, The headband Metal Peice is abit to short though.
 

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