Naruto wip

[Neon]

You forgot a few things on Naruto, CJ. I believe he has one of those swirls on his left shoulder. You also forgot the patch on his back and that kunai holding thing on his right leg. Though you probably chose not to add those.

 

[CrackerJack]

I do want to release this model ALMOST perfect (nothing is every pefect) and yes, the head is a tad off, but I dont know what needs fixing.

The swirl on his back was there, and the kunai holder and swirl on his shoulder are done, i think I had them hidden when I took that pic. Ill take a new one in a sec, lemme play around with the head.

 

[Neon]

Er.. didn't mean to say patch. I meant the pouch. The lil brown thing he has behind him to carry more items. xD

P.S. You still haven't given me your AIM yet =P

 

[Kasey]

Looks really good. I just noticed the lines on his cheeks are slanted too much. They should be a little more horizontal than how they are right now. Or maybe they're too low on his face.

 

[CrackerJack]

and face?

I like it more, thanks for the crit

 

[Kasey]

That's a lot better. It looks really good. I can't wait until its released. Are you going to show the kyubi form again after all of those changes? And from the last pic of the kyubi form his eyes need to be more catlike.

 

[Deathshot]

When you are Finished, Can I turn it into a TS model ? For The Specialists ?

 

[CrackerJack]

Yes, I will make a kyuubi

and yes, u can put it in ts We can discuss that when I release that for esf

 

[Deathshot]

Nice! I got a new Favorite TS model! ! Also if ya ever need Refs, just call me

 

[CrackerJack]

Completely finished now. Yay

JUST NEEDS RIGGIN! Someone help D:

 

[WeedSter]

When you are Finished, Can I turn it into a TS model ? For The Specialists ?

ff topic: omg yea please gimme to xD

n topic: man its very cool hope it gets rigged fast ^^ and make a sasuke too xD!

 

[PiXel]

i can hardly see the contrast on the face, really.

ingame it will look even worser, i made the same wrong ****.... just upper the contrast. and give narutos head more darker tones.

 

[QMark]

You still didn't fix the eyes brows. They need to be lined just under the headband so the upper half goes behind it. NVM, Ill just do a drawover:

 

[Super Veggeto]

QMark you got it down but CJ already mentioned it would be too much truble to fix the eyebrows... =[

I do agree with the rest though, ears and side burns, you neglected the hair on the sides CJ 3; so I think side burns should cover em up.

Good work though man, looking forward to try it out on ESF <3

 

[QMark]

Sorry, I mostly skimmed through the thread until I saw the outcome.

Anyway, even if you can't fix the eyebrows could you at least do the ears? It would make the model look about 10% better. A solution to the eyebrow thing would also be simplified by pulling down the headband just a tad to cover up the forehead a bit.

 

[Mobius ^^]

Looks better but his head is still just a tad too long If you could just pull the hair and head band down a bit it would look somewhat more naruto-ish?

Anyway great job so far keep it up!

 

[CrackerJack]

I fiddled with they eyebrows about 20x now, and I cant fix it. Sorry guys. Next time, I will model it differently. Im still gonna try to fix it, though. The ears should be something I can fix, ill check that out. And the shading, I guess I can change that too. But ingame, it actually looks nice (i did a quick quick rig, looks like absolute crap, but I did it >_>)

im working on 2 models now for esf, 1 im just skinning, and kakashi. Both are naruto models

edit

You may not notice it, but there is a diff. Slight, but it does look better.
More shading
I lowered his headband/hair
i changed ears

Still no luck on the eye brows. The problem was with the map, when i put the brows on, they look like this:
\_ there crooked >_< It makes it even look even worse. I tampered with the map for almost an hour, and it still looks crooked. It never makes that straight line thats very sharp that naruto has. I modeled it wrong >_<

 

[yopyop]

man...plz change the damn eyebrows.... xD

 

[Super Veggeto]

Side burns! he looks bald under there lol

 

[Mobius ^^]

looks good can't wait to try it out in-game