Naruto wip

[CrackerJack]

UPDATE* Can someone please help me with assaigning him. I cant ;-/. PLEASE pm me D:

 

[ShadyD]

Decent stuff, his kunai-sack thingy is wrong tho, lines should be horizontal.
Oh and make the ends of the bandana long They own even if they are not on the pre-gap naruto.

Loose bandana's are always cool!
(jack jazzrabit lol?, Rambo, Turtles, Solid Snake)

 

[Super Veggeto]

Nice start CJ =D the model looks fine to me, proportions are cool and all.
Skin is too early to judge but I can say that what you got on the pants dont exactly match the shirt and like Shady mentioned the lines on his legband should be horizontal.

Thats what I can see for now, you got the head looking nice too =D cant wait to see more :3

 

[CrackerJack]

Facez0r

 

[Grampz]

 

[john_volkov]

the model look's verry good 9/10 good job

 

[jp]

Facez0r

The nose looks weird :3, and the metal plate thingy is too small.

Other then it looks good ^^

 

[wheres_]

Don't define the sides fo the nose so much and move his eyes up.

 

[CrackerJack]

Made adjustments. I personally think it looks loads better

 

[TwisteR]

Yeah looks tons better. So far so good, CJ.

 

[CrackerJack]

Update

Put it on the body
Gonna redo his lil white collar soon, I mapped it wierd.

It will be for esf btw, who should I have it replace.

 

[Cold Steel]

The headband is supposed be covering most of the brows. The head is also too large, vertical wise.

 

[Super Veggeto]

Yep, agree with Cold.
Made a little (crappy x_x) drawover...but it should point out what to fix

Good improvment though =] it's coming along nicely.

 

[scope]

his neck looks likes it is too high, you should lower it...

 

[CrackerJack]

Its not perfect, but it was an improvement. Ill see what else I can do later with the eyebrows and head.

 

[Yo-MoMa]

even though its not perfect it looks really nice.

 

[Deathshot]

If ya need this here ya go =D

 

[PiXel]

where is the nose? where is the defination, damn Contrast neeeded! difference between colors, depper shadin lol

and some more straight sharper lines.

 

[CrackerJack]

Re-mapped and edited a lot of the skin, added feet, and some other stuff..

So yeah, ill work more on head and any other crits later.

 

[Deathshot]

Nice, He looks great, The headband Metal Peice is abit to short though.