Naruto model ( pre 3 yr gap)

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@ Jariroth

thnx for the effort of going true that reference pic.
But as you know kishimoto never draws naruto EXACTLY the same.

I used the naruto character sheet as a reference.
take a look at the image:


+ the image you had is from a whole different perspective.

@Bapplebo

thnx for the comment. Ill give him a bit of a blush or something..
 
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slant the eye where it meets the eyebrow and give him a killin look lol like he is about to fight, gooks great tho
 

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Pretty good, but I think his eyes are way too big.
 
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Gon said:
Pretty good, but I think his eyes are way too big.
If you look at his ref again you'll see that he got them just right.

Like he said, Naruto is drawn differently every time.

I think it looks quite alright, maybe find a different way to pose the eyes but over all it's really nice.

Hope your planning on a Kyuubi Naruto! and dont forget to make him look psyco, small pupils will do the trick for that =D
 
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Thicken the blacklines around the eyes to get rid of the heroine look.
 
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I tried my UBER best with my UBER ps skills to get some crits across of what I had in mind...

 

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Looks very good, but its as if he's had one cup of coffee too much.
 
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Looks great, but yeah, maybe make the eye's pupil a bit smaller, well I think that's to do with the skin, but the rest of the head looks very well done.
 
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@ Gon:
Take a look at the ref picture i posted.They match up quite good.

@ Super Veggeto:
thnx.Well I dunno about a kyuubi version.Cause id also have to change the mesh for that. And i dunno how that would work with the uvw stuff (cause i dont know how to uvw (yet))

@ Sadner:
hmmm good point. I'll try and see how that looks.

@ broli:
Thnx.I'll take a closer look at it in a few minutes.
perhaps it would help if you also explained what you changed exactly.

@ jp:
lol I'm working on that problem.

@ donnierisk:
ofcourse it has to do with the skin.I dont even think people that
do highpoly models, model the pupils :p but ill see what i can do.
 
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Well I dunno about a kyuubi version.Cause id also have to change the mesh for that
=O are you sure?
What for?
The hair does change but you dont have to go that far, the only thing you might need to do is change the mouth but it seems flexable enough to be changed =o
 
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well for a kyuubi version to work imo you should be able to see his teeth.thus a opened mouth would be best. But the way the mesh is now that cant be done so.. :s
 
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Oh wait, you should make the pupils bigger so he doesn't look as shocked. That will probably do the trick.
 
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Hey man I did a little paint over for you.

Here ya go





It should be pretty self-explanatory. Great work so far :D
 
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GJ NT, you broke his nose
i think its mainly the eyebrows setting his eyes off..maybe?
 
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Ne0TeK said:
Hey man I did a little paint over for you.

Here ya go





It should be pretty self-explanatory. Great work so far :D
Your trying too hard.
 
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My crits:

Make the eyelashes more apparent at the edges
reduce the slope of the nostrils
make the pupils/iris slightly smaller
make the edges of the eyebrows a little more apparent

It looks good man, i really like it, even though there have been some nice paint overs, I dont think anybody here realises that you'd draw the best drawover out of all of us Sven :p. The face shape/placement, is all good, just work on those little details.
 
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yeh thanks davidskiwan... ill figure something out.First i wanna finish the rest of the body b4 i become lazy again..
 
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xD lazy isnt bad but you mean too lazy haha =)
rly, for me his black outer his eyes are bothering me =) good job man.
 
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yeh but you know.. the thing that sucks is.. that i merged all the different eye layers.. so id have to do some serious editing on the eyes to adjust them.
So im going to finish of the rest first.. then do all the stuff people crit on.
 

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