LSSJ Broli/Brolli/Brolly WIP

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Topic name says it all... currently working on Legendary Super Saiya-Jin Brolly.

Here is a picture on a temporary image host (if you have any good hosts, send me the links to them by PM).


Currently happy with:
+ The head really looks like brolly.
+ The ears look good enough.

Currently unhappy with:
- The.. uhh.. throat thingies aren't modeled yet.
- The render looks weird, but it was really too dark if I tried a different render.
- ...the smile looks really weird in the render.

Crits are welcome, no unhelpful critizism ("THAT MODEL SUCKS, D00D")
 
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seems promising, my crits are all what you are unhappy with, heh. that and the skin tone, he was a shade darker if i remember and maybe its the brightness in the render - gj!
 

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I can't really say that his skin tone should be darker... he looked really pale when LSSJ! I do agree that the render made its toll... but he IS pale:
 
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I think it would look better with his mouth closed
 
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yeah, he looks like a big happy pumpkin with that massive grin, id say if u fix that itll be awsome
 
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if your happy with the smile at last add a few polys to the bottom lip so it doesnt look so blocky, thats the only thing i see wrong with it at this point,

the mouth looks round enough, but the lip which is slightly larger in scale looks too blocky, you should just need to divide some edges and scale the new verts to fix that
 
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Lol, nice smile.. The head is a great wip. :smile:
 
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AHHH its brolli! run away! (hehe)

ontopic: looking very good looks just like him^_^ the only prob with it is the mouth, it looks a bit blocky atm
but thats it ^_^

its looking very nice, good job am looking forward to updates^_^
 
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SSJ Toast said:
is that his complete hair? it seems way to short
I HIGHLY doubt it's complete, that's probably just his start on the hair.
 
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:shocked: the Legendary Super Saiyan... he's going to kill us all!

I recently say movie 8 for the first time and it ROCKED! So I'm happy someone's gonna make a Brolly model.

Looks good so far; but make the smile look more Brolly like.
 
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The mouthcorners don't go up that much, can't really say anything else.
 
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ive never saw such cheezy smiles on a person thats evil as brolly <_< try posing him with a evil grin or somn ^_^

coming good though
 
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Ice Man said:
ive never saw such cheezy smiles on a person thats evil as brolly <_< try posing him with a evil grin or somn ^_^

coming good though
While I was looking for ref pics, I came across the grin I think ZuL was going for. I was as shocked as anyone that brolly actually had such a similar grin. Here's an example of it:
http://vanime.gamigo.de/cgi-bin/imagefolio/imageFolio.cgi?action=view&link=Dragonball/High%20Quality/Brolly&image=HQ%20-%20223.jpg&img=32&tt=

Is it just me, or does that grin TOTALLY not suit brolly?:laff:
 
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i only have a slight problem with his inhumanly large grin.

his hair is hopefully going to be multiplied by 2, broll didnt have that little hair.
 
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Meh, i'm sure Zul will take care of it. Some of you remember the vegetunks model, right? Then this one will also be pwnage.
 

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