latest (heh) wip

[-Origin]

I've been trying to get back into photoshop, I haven't made anything worthwhile for quite some time now, and with the help of my buddy jnh I kinda got back into it, he has helped me a lot and I've finally made another....wip.

Crits, comments?

EDIT: Oh yeah, the stock is from www.spiraleyes.com

EDIT 2: Isn't it just AWESOME how this topic gets 22 views but not a *single* reply. Just...awesome.

UPDATE;

 

[Skiwan]

I like it, nice stock, and nice colour u put with it, i like the smokey effect. I like ths saturation on the stock on the first one a little more though, but it wouldnt suit the background on the second, but maybe if there was an inbetween i'd like it more... but as it is its pretty cool, but something i'd change, the layout and flow is very nice, i like it alot, the text is a little plain but it fits well... you could still explore other fonts if u wanted to though.

All in all its nice, good colour scheme nice flow, good effects, unusual stock, gets 8/10 from me

 

[Tales]

psh like i said before, i love this sig =P