Kai-Gohan W.I.P (Low Poly)

[PiXel]

Ok ill fix it! Well well see!
More crits?

 

[Super Veggeto]

dude you should of asked me to use my gohan as ref >_>
where did you got it from anyway, i didnt released it...

EDIT: show me flat, it looks like you used the face itself. not as ref :\ but show me flat just to make sure

 

[PiXel]

I dont even got ur model! Some one Who calls 5p3h3r Contact me in Msn and said that he got a nice ref for me...I accepted it.. then i asked if the ref got a name of a creator..He tels me that it was Super Vegetto..so i knew that it was urs.. i used the ref! But im sorry for that that i dont asked ya! because i thought if im using something from someone other...then i can use it but have to give credits and if i dont ask!
btw. i will try to contact 5p3h3r and ask him where he get the model...

 

[Cruzharo]

OK 1st of all I am not that good of a modeler but here is what I think.

Just trying to help.

 

[BlueDragon]

So all that you are saying is that you just want to make the point of the sword longer that is a good idea.

 

[broli]

swords arn't really that hrd to model, just some extrusion method will do here's a quick 10 min job you may use it as ref I won't mind

and for the model, well he looks very boxy, try to work on the torso some more

 

[PiXel]

Yup!
Yester day i Fixed the boxy thing! I allready Tried to fix it! I think it looks better now...Updates will be tomorow!
and Broli...Thanks that u want help me, but ur sword got an error... the yellow thing at the end of the handel with the greenthingy.. should be longer ^^ And i wouldnt use it as ref! Thanks but i dont want! and Cruzharo...Thanks for the tip...i will use it!
(btw. i redo the arms...And Super Vegetto told me that i can use his face ref... thanks!)

EDIT***+
I edited the sword...and the point to make the vertex (point) more upper didnt helped. so i grabed in my mind ^^ Here what comes out!

 

[jp]

Looks good,

 

[PiXel]

Lol...The first one who said that it looks good or?
Well I update now the arms...uper body and the sword i allready updated ^^

Ok,crits? (btw. the arms arnt complete...i only did at this place where i can make the elbows!

EDIT****
Many ppl see this thread but dont write! I hate something like that!
anyway...I completed the ears...and i edited the mouth...that ill be betta to animate! And i fixed the arms abit....polyflow and shoulders! :]
but can u crit this model here upper? or u dont like tthe sword?

 

[TrIdAn]

the sword is fine but the gohan is not so cool.

 

[Cruzharo]

Well all looks good sofar. Keep it up and the model should be pretty kewl. Heh

 

[PiXel]

Updated! It could be that i wouldnt show u updates between 2 weeks! because i Fly to Turkey ^^ So dont miss me! and crit the model!

 

[Cruzharo]

Looks like it is coming good. Like I said keep it up.

 

[PiXel]

I try to finish the model faster as i can...but if only one reply without crits...i feel me dissmissed! because i think Nobody got a crit or think about the model something!
Please reply...i cannot think that the model is good without any crit or replys!

Update!

 

[yoyoyoyo]

no offence but i think making the sword is pointless. because gohan cant use swords only trunks can

 

[Super Veggeto]

umm ok, it need some harsh tweaks but it's good for a start, ill give you that.

lets see... first, arms are really messy, so is the torso. polyflow is pretty bad which shows unwanted shadows.
although the lower part seems good enough to me...
and he is really really but really thin from the side view.

i know you are trying to keep it low poly but do it right. you have to make the polyflow look good even if it needs a few more polys.

gj though, keep it up

 

[PiXel]

@yoyoyo
Hehe....U think I cant animate?
The model Will be fully animated with the sword...everything at new!
And also...First i want to start a project with this model and with Tweek and Chireru.
Then i will release the model! ^^ So the sword isnt point lees!

@Super Vegetto
Big "THX"
now i got thinks to fix ^^ i will do it faster as i can!

 

[Denz]

Keep it up Germy!
u are going gr8
but thechest area is realy plain
maybe add more detail to it

 

[PiXel]

Ok chest....fixing chest! Good idea ^^ And also its an update above!

 

[movento]

the arm are pretty bad,move his head to the back.Also i would crit the side view but i see that you made a bit better.