Kai-Gohan W.I.P (Low Poly)

[PiXel]

Kai-Gohan W.I.P

Well as u see I try to make a Good but Low polyed kai-Gohan model with the Z-Sword....
Gohans upper Body:

Z-Sword:

Crits?

****EDIT....
Blah! I have to wait so long! so i edited the sword! it was to short!

 

[Mystacx]

hey, im not the one to crit on the body and stuff
but i know swordzehs

i think those (damn i dunno what to call them in english) the horizontal things on the hilt should be a little shorter!!!
also i hope you make this one a damn good model!
a little tip: make one with and one without the swordseh!

g'luck

 

[PiXel]

Well... it will be released...But after a long time... because I got a great project to do with Chireru and Tweek ^^"
and... the sword is right for me....If crits..then please crit with this pic..

or a pic of the Z-sword! And also if u crit... please do a drawover if u can! Im not very intelligent in english (im 13 btw. ^^)

 

[Sicron]

make the blade (not the thing where u hold it, but the blade) thicker and maybe the yellow things a bit shorter =O

 

[PiXel]

Well does it look like that or not? maybe i should make the blade widther or? and the yellow fits i think!

 

[Fire Phoenix]

make the sword a tad wider...

 

[PiXel]

Well ok i did it... but are there no crits to the upper body of gohan?

 

[Sicron]

not much no, its low poly...so i dont know how far i can crit...sure i can crit on it but then the polies would become alot higher =\

 

[PiXel]

Oright...but if there will be crits then crit me! (If something dont match like it should be)
Also i know that the sword got a detail on the blade start! I will finish first the model then i will see how i can poly up my model!
(btw. working on detail of Upperbody..next step will be arms)

 

[BlueDragon]

I like the sword but what program d you use?

 

[PiXel]

Well i think u should read the stickys...but its like most ppl use it.!
Milkshape 3d 1.6.6a!

 

[Tweek]

..hmmm :S the gohan needs work !! The sword isnt looking 2 shabby but (as peeps have said) widen the blade and mayb edit the hilt a bit .. hears a good ref

..Tweek 3_Is ThE MagiC NumbeR

 

[Enix]

The handle of the Zsword should be longer, and there is a half shpear on the end not a crushes shpear. I made one a while ago i want to show you but the pics where all on my old host, but they seem to be gone or down for a long time.....

And the i cant crit much on the body since there isnt much there.

 

[PiXel]

Well, tomorow i think i will be finishing the model and i will fix the sword!

Btw... Enix i remember ur one! And u made it for a map...some one asked u!
i know! ill fix it! ^^

 

[BlueDragon]

I dowload milkshape 1.7.1 last night but need the register key.

 

[PiXel]

Well thats not my probleme...Find a way to get a key! Or even easier to Buy it!

Updates: Z-sword Fixed and i ad more detail!

Edit....
The handle was to widht...

 

[BlueDragon]

Don't worry because i have it thanx.

 

[Tweek]

..hmmm. i think this might help (even if only a little)

..Tweek 3_Is ThE MagiC NumbeR

 

[PiXel]

Dont I shown ya the Pic?
Btw. the arms will be made later...Im making the face right now!

EDIT:::::

CREDITS FOR REF TO SUPER VEGETTO OF HIS GOHAN MODEL (FACE ref)

Ok...Face done!
Ok..ugly Arms Done ^^!
Ok can u crit now? ;/

Mouth is animate able! ^^

 

[Tweek]

..well the sword is looking better but it looks like gohan has eaten a bit 2 much :S lol.. make him thinner and add sum definition 2 his torso

..Tweek 3_Is ThE MagiC NumbeR