JaK WIP ( n00b model. )

[Zarp]

HEre is my first really model.. it is not so cool but i am just a n00b...
give som critz

 

[Drunken Trunks]

er...
the shoulder thing is WAYYYY
to big
but the rest is pretty good for ur first time
though the render makes him look too shiny
oh and whats the polycount?

 

[Saiga]

I think for a first model that's pretty good, however, if you look just under the shoulder pad his actual shoulder is massive. Way too rounded and points out too much, doesn't look very realistic, just tone it down some and it'll be great.

 

[SajaN^PridE]

Lookin` pretty good for a first time, maybe u should post teh ref u`ve been using, that everyone could see it`s not a human... Keep it up!

 

[Zarp]

Ok i try to fix it...

update later today....

this is jak and his frinde dexter...

and here is he pist off and full off dark ECO

you willnot get my self draw ref pic.... put you can look a this..!

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UPDATE!!!!

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one update more

bye

 

[SajaN^PridE]

Looks good

 

[Zarp]

Update

Here is an update..! giv critz!!;D

 

[Saiga]

I've noticed you're modelling him as a human, the proportions are different to your refs, if you take a look at the image where Jak is "pissed off and full of dark ECO", you'll see that his legs and arms should be shorter. His shoulders could be wider too, along with a thinner waist. Good so far dude.

 

[Zarp]

he is also an monster tere his body is transformt to a evil think.. not like the good version