Gohan WIP ( 1, pbp model)

[Zarp]

here is my redo of the body!

give critz

 

[Styer101]

this must be the teenage gohan correct? it looks good what program u using? no crits

 

[Zarp]

this must be the teenage gohan correct? it looks good what program u using? no crits

i am using Milkshape.. yes it is teen gohan,,,

UPDATE!!!

 

[assaf]

Nice model you got there, but make the pants less baggy. And the hands look a bit skinny, but that could be just me.

 

[SajaN^PridE]

good for a first one!

 

[Super Veggeto]

yea it's nice for a first one i guess, but i can see you used cylinders...
arms have no detail at all...same with pants, too dull, too cylinder-ish if you know what i mean.
and the shirt looks messy, the polyflow is wrong, can you show flat shaded please?

 

[D2]

hmm he's right on the arms, but since it still a wip, it looks pretty good.
can't wait to see the end result and head

 

[Devion]

Like SV said the poly flow aint good.

Also you waste ALLOT of polies with the band around his tallie.(My english sucks )

 

[DBXMe2]

keep at it, ur getting there.. and near the chest.. fix a little, downgrade the poly count there

 

[Zarp]

hmm.. ok.. i try tha arms a not cylenders but just bad made... if you what flat pic tjek the treath Help me!! ( my first pbp model..! )

and hmm what is a poly flow..? i know i am a big n00b... hmm i use to skin you know

 

[Jenny_Kitty]

Just thought I should let you know, there will be animation issues in the legs if you dont fix them.

 

[Styer101]

not trying to be a prick or anything but mabey you should tell him how to fix that rather than just saying its gonna mess up...

any ways if thats a teen gohan i think that ur legs r too short check ur proportions heres a pic

 

[Jenny_Kitty]

Well, when I say its gonna mess up in the legs, its kind of obvious for a couple reasons:

-There is no knee, just a straight line of vertecies
-It has no Triangulation in the hips and arm sockets

There, I pointed it out ^_^

 

[Styer101]

thank u i just remeber being a noob.. i mean.. i am one :fight: so i know how it feels to get crits like that and not know what to do.

but yea i hope that ref helps