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Posted by nuttzy - Yesterday at 09:34 PM

cuz those lines arent that great, they are way too dark, which makes them stand out too much,
they aint evenly spaced out either, makes it look really sloppy,
(updated it alot now , looks fine on the uvwmap prolly some stretching going on I suppose)


the yellow padded sections of the armor need some work as well, on the shins they arent centered on the leg as they should be, and on the forearm they are too narrow, on the stomach it is insanely large,
( I'll get to them soon)


the skintones for the legs+feet, arms+hands are different balance that out,
(legs + arms are same tone like show) (hands + feet are a different tone just like the neck skin check the refs :) )


also as noted by other people, the shoulder+chest armor is wrong as well,
( I already said the shoulder armour wasn't accurate)


that face is actually pretty good, prolem is, the rest of it doesnt match up,
( thanks! lol I still hate it )

(you did ask for crits, here they are)


Thanks for the critz nuttz! I ain't really a practising skinner but I try lol :talk:
 
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Pretty cool but the face is ergh ugly :/ and the feet are just wierd
 
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nice man :yes:
but i think the armor thing has to be smaller because the head looks like 'small' ;)
 
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i think i found outthe problem, his torso is to wide,making it look unproportional to the rest of the body\face...
 

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The model is pretty bad, I've gotta say. The Body lookes stretched, the shoulders are too big... bleh, but that's not your problem, you're the skinner.

Show, it looks pretty cool. Nothing I can crit hasn't been critted before. :p
 
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I agree, the model really is bad!!
but you are a pretty good skinner!!!
maybe you should ask some1 to model for you and U'll skin???

anyway its better then the original one, I think...

are you going to release it???
 
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okay heres an update on the model and a couple of skin tweaks, tenken did the editing on the model :p getting theres slowly now !





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make him tinner (around his stumach) put the side things of his neck (dunno what to call it) lower so we see his neck better, make legs longer, make the whiteish looking parts more pink (really light pink, almost white), and those things next to his neck from the armor are brown with lines


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