ESF Movie Arival of Raditz

[john_volkov]

As the title sayis I am working on a movie whith andreyesf . This movie is form Arival of Raditz so I hope you like it We will sone finish, it we're just at the battle of Raditz here is a screm shot form the movie

I think By the day of this day we will finish it + uplode encoding bla bla today or tomorow anyway im gongi to meka the movie so long

 

[.Maze]

Some Tips.
Dont use the scouter.
and
make "Hud draw 0"
when taking screens.

 

[john_volkov]

10x a lol i'v forgot about hud_draw but it's still god we ar just finishing now

 

[donnierisk]

okay, but is it a good storyline and do you type or say the things in that "movie"?

 

[|Overlord|]

I thought you hated andreyesf =S. Hopefully it's a movie and not screen shots + story lines like your previous ingame workings, as I really didn't think much of those.

 

[john_volkov]

Yes it's a movie if you what i can slap some sens in andreyesf he levis near me and the movie is geting Good and the movie is at his comp and he is not home so you all got to whait and yes we usd say to type what he sayid, and can you give me a upload link for free uploads rapidshare.de or what
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Edit :
here is the Download Like and this is the firs and not the last there will be more
Sayian saga is coming up next
http://rapidshare.de/files/15900234/Arrival_of_Radditz.rar.html

 

[john_volkov]

sry about the Double post but dose the Link work ??

 

[Mccdbz5]

That member "SSJGoku" already made a movie off this. Maybe you did a better job than him =/.

 

[$sj Goku]

Hey guys lol great first attempt..

Im here to give you some advice...

Try turning the huds off so you dont get the cross hair and stuff in the way

advice.. next time try using *subtitles* instead of typing it during the video. Im sure it will come out better.

great job keep practicing

you guys have inspired me to use text in certain parts of my vid

 

[john_volkov]

Yes it will I will make sure of it I am not going to make the other guy do it it will sone come
We will need a Nappa model and a map for the batlle can some on help and o small kid gohan

 

[MC]

It wasn't too bad, the problems I had with it:

All the dialogue was typed out, not to mention it was hard to read it sometimes, also you mispelled a number of words, and used improper grammer.

There was barely any smooth transitions between scenes.

The map that was used didn't fit at all with the actual episode.

The music used throughout the video did not flow at all with what was going on.

No sound most of the time (besides the occasional sound effects).

I really don't mean to be offensive in my opinion in any way, I doubt I would have done even half as good as you did. Besides everything I previously listed, it was still an interesting video, nonetheless.

 

[Ravendust]

It was interesting, I wouldn't say it was bad, I think you have a few good ideas there but they need tightening up.

1) Hire another guy and have him film it as spectator for some parts where the camera shouldn't be focused on one character, or seen through the eyes of one character.

2) Use the AMXX powerlevel editor. Both Piccolo and Goku were stronger than Raditz according to the scouter. Similarly, Gohan's power was 627,931 when Raditz said it was '2500'.

3) Use Darksuns aura model.

4) Use audio from the show instead of typing dialogue.

5) If you make a mistake, don't pretend it didn't happen. Cut it and reshoot the scene.

6) Scrap the music.

7) At the end;
"Piccolo killed Raditz with Special Beam Cannon"
"Piccolo killed A18 with Special Beam Cannon"

8) Use more than one map. An example of this is Kame's island on top of a rocky peninsula.

9) As MC said, you can make better transitions when editing later (you're using Windows Movie Maker, so take advantage of what it has to offer).

10) Get rid of everything HUD related when filming.

 

[CyroTek]

Pretty fun. Nice try, but yeh. I would write wat i don´t like bout it....but all ppl before already did, so yeh...

I luv to see how ya make typos and correct them. Lol.

Im sure wit all those tips the next movie will be a banger.

 

[john_volkov]

Use Darksuns aura model.
Where can i get Darksuns Model ?

 

[Adaptus]

www.esf-world.com

 

[john_volkov]

where ccan you give me a direct link to esf-world
Because I did find anything on esf-world on sprits

 

[Shorty_ss3]

Here is the link to the animated aura:

http://www.esf-world.com/main.php?content=fileinfo&file_id=24650

 

[john_volkov]

10x a lot shorty_ss3(Multumesc Shorty_ss3)
The only thing i dind not like about the Arival of raditz is when Goku shot a kamehameha thowrds Radiz and Raditz block I think my Kamehameha could be beter controld

 

[imkongkong]

hmm it was.. uhh.. a for effort! =P

anyways i see you used my map >_< but i'd suggest using differnet maps as well...

i'd like to direct a movie if i have willing ppl to be the actors, i actually took a lot of film classes and have a lot of experience with film editing and stuff, so if u want a real good movie let me know, when im not busy

 

[Shorty_ss3]

One question for John_Volkov :

Where did u downloaded the Goku model from the Arival of Raditz movie ?
PLZ tell me.