right, i saw a lot of problems so i went to the trouble of making a drawover, it was fun, havent drawn any dbz in a long long time 
fun practice, anyway, first of all, OMG 18's hair is the wrong way round =O cummon, that was the biggest mistake on the model. Her eyes are too high up, in dbz the eyes on females are brought closer to the nose and the mouth because female faces are less in size than male. The eyebrows should start thicker in the middle and get thinner across the eye, and there is a problem where the eye is too stretched across and no lashes, also, what the hell are those things over her eyebrows? sorry its just i see that LOADS across many different dbz models, they dont exist.... ever in dbz, yet people put them there all the time..... if people are trying to show stress lines above the eyes they curve towards the middle of the eyebrows and they are only very very slight, if ur going for the thing that the characters have wen they're pissed off and the skin gathers between thier eyes, its just like a capital E on its side >_<. Her hips are too low down for a woman, and her back is jus.... deformed, and shows no spine her breasts are too round, no natural curve, and her legs and arms are incorrectly emphasised for a woman. the rest should be explained by the drawover:
i made the background sorta transparent cuz it wud be easier to see the drawover, i hope it helps to see where the mistakes are, and oh, she needs ankles, they define the legs a lot more than people realise >_<
fun practice, anyway, first of all, OMG 18's hair is the wrong way round =O cummon, that was the biggest mistake on the model. Her eyes are too high up, in dbz the eyes on females are brought closer to the nose and the mouth because female faces are less in size than male. The eyebrows should start thicker in the middle and get thinner across the eye, and there is a problem where the eye is too stretched across and no lashes, also, what the hell are those things over her eyebrows? sorry its just i see that LOADS across many different dbz models, they dont exist.... ever in dbz, yet people put them there all the time..... if people are trying to show stress lines above the eyes they curve towards the middle of the eyebrows and they are only very very slight, if ur going for the thing that the characters have wen they're pissed off and the skin gathers between thier eyes, its just like a capital E on its side >_<. Her hips are too low down for a woman, and her back is jus.... deformed, and shows no spine her breasts are too round, no natural curve, and her legs and arms are incorrectly emphasised for a woman. the rest should be explained by the drawover:
i made the background sorta transparent cuz it wud be easier to see the drawover, i hope it helps to see where the mistakes are, and oh, she needs ankles, they define the legs a lot more than people realise >_<
