I am officially traumatised by the length of that neck *shivers*. Gir did good on the drawover however, but i think ashur was pointing out that her lower right leg needs to be less bent to follow the same direction as the left one, although it flows better on the drawover... whatever.
Gir - Polykarbon is a good site, patrick is really good at drawing. Have you ever visited the forums? There's a lot of cool arts (and not-so-cool) being posted alla the time for C+C, its a great place to learn and stuff. Its got a fair amount of beginners, most are kinda average, and there's one or 2 awesome people that inspire me. If you don't know it you should check it out for sure. I dunno if there is a link to it from the site anymore as he hardly ever updates and the bbs changed URL's, but it's
here anyway.