one leg is also longer than the other, and the shoulder is drawn in a weird place, which throws the whole upper body off... when i get back from work, if someone else hasnt already, ill draw the stick figure of where the joints should go
hope this helps, ive tried to get it so you wont need to edit your picture too much, but the proportions are still pretty screwed.. i would suggest drawing your own stick figure in many poses, until you get good with proportions, and forshortening, then try redrawing this picture, and compare the two
I am officially traumatised by the length of that neck *shivers*. Gir did good on the drawover however, but i think ashur was pointing out that her lower right leg needs to be less bent to follow the same direction as the left one, although it flows better on the drawover... whatever.
Gir - Polykarbon is a good site, patrick is really good at drawing. Have you ever visited the forums? There's a lot of cool arts (and not-so-cool) being posted alla the time for C+C, its a great place to learn and stuff. Its got a fair amount of beginners, most are kinda average, and there's one or 2 awesome people that inspire me. If you don't know it you should check it out for sure. I dunno if there is a link to it from the site anymore as he hardly ever updates and the bbs changed URL's, but it's here anyway.