[wip] Guile

[someone1074]

hm...I really feel his upper chest and arms should be alot bigger...but that would be my 'artistic' interpretation of ALL SF characters...cause most of them (the guys anyway) are shaped in that manner.

Technically there's nothing wrong with it at this point...I'm just not a fan of realistic arms in SF characters.

 

[TeKNiK]

Yeah it's more personal preference than anything else :O

Update :O

Texturing

 

[Ravendust]

Nice pants, one thing that I noticed is that the hair on the Guile pics slopes upwards, but yours is at a sharp angle which makes it look like you've chopped the end off a cone and stuck it on his head:



Hope you see what I mean.

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

*sigh* i seem to think that the torso is too... let's say, long. He looks like he's either sagging his pants, or just have a long torso. Pull it up a tad and widen it some. Give him the "Bulky" feel he deserves rather than letting him look tall and slinky.... catch my drift?

And yes i also agree that the arms need to be bulkier as well IMO

 

[Ravendust]

I made a pic to illustrate my hair point:



Oh and for the arms, look at the pic in your sig, one arm is as thick as his body. I know it's exaggerated but all the pics posted have bigger arms.

 

[Growler]

*sigh* i seem to think that the torso is too... let's say, long. He looks like he's either sagging his pants, or just have a long torso. Pull it up a tad and widen it some. Give him the "Bulky" feel he deserves rather than letting him look tall and slinky.... catch my drift?

And yes i also agree that the arms need to be bulkier as well IMO

i think that can be left to the artists impression...

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

Fu.....udge the artist impression! I wanna see guile! Not G-I Joe with blonde hair and a tanktop! -_-

If he was painting a picture of Mona Lisa (sp?) and it looked like suttin else, the art teacher wouldn't go "well this is the artist impression" would she/he?

Modeling is another form of art, And to model a character, you have to match it's design, not on how you "Want" it to look.

How can we crit on something if the "artist" wants the "artwork" on how he "wants it to look"... it wouldn't necessarily be guile, just some character...

hard to explain

 

[Growler]

i think that can be left to the artists impression...

ya, I know, just proving a point to our new moderator.
anyway, I would really like to see more definition in the shirt. Tank tops dont usually bag out anyway, if you have ever seen one.

 

[TwisteR]

Gir, saying "I think that can be left up to the artist's impression" is an obvious argument to my crit. It was my opinion, and its not even your model, so why bother saying something like that? Now just drop it, kthx.

Dan16, stop trying to start trouble with forum staff. This comment earned you a warning for spam. If you have a problem with what someone said, please take it up with that person instead of posting it in the thread.

 

[TeKNiK]

More adjustments, Thanks for you critz

 

[Eclipse]

Legs are too short

 

[PiXel]

i dont think his legs r to small... his legs are in lil baggies... so expect them like that small.
Also i like it alot.

 

[TeKNiK]

Yeah i noticed that not too long after i posted

 

[PiXel]

Hmmm, well i thought the legs had been ok...

but ^^ comming out well... will you skin it soon?

 

[TeKNiK]

texturing the face as we speak? still some things i'm not happy with but coming along pretty nicely.

 

[PiXel]

uhmmm.... i think you tooked the wrong color for the lips O-o"

also the hair seems freaky funny textured X-D

otherwise, yup is comin along pretty nice.

 

[MickeyG]

I made a pic to illustrate my hair point:



Oh and for the arms, look at the pic in your sig, one arm is as thick as his body. I know it's exaggerated but all the pics posted have bigger arms.

i still think you need to fix the hair like ravendust told ya..
and for the skin.. try (if you have the skills) to make a realistic skin (not that i can do that )
but overall nice model keep it up!!