WIP: Goku

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hmm third goku model on this board atm o_O..
Must be some kind of infection..
head wires


Full Body front/Side


Wire render


C&C Highly apreciated!
 
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thats some pretty solid work man, care to post a 3/4ths view? i wanna see how the hair holds up from all angles :p. You can reduce it a bit if you want, but it's not needed and you might want to make the pants a little baggier around the shoes/shin.
 
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ty, here are the 3/4th views.. Apparently the hair doesnt maintain its shape, guess ill just have to fix that.. and baggy up his pants.. Tommorow that is.. for now.. i need sleep (ouch, 5:50 AM ;_;)
 
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hmm fromt hose shots i would say that the forehead needs to be pulled forward a little more. If you look at a head from the top it makes more a U shape then an circular shape...if that makes any sense.
 
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dude , looks really good, not to be rude or else but that the best work i?ve seen from yo, i llike it alot, though theo nly i dont like is that the hair in the back looks poor, i mean 3 spikes so tinny.

gj!
 
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It look's good realy a good work
 
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@TF: No More <3 FOR JOO!!! ;_;!!
j/k man, thnx, This is actually 1 of the models im proud of.. Besides i've made allot more since i last posted a WIP here ;)

I fixed the heads U shape and made it a bit more like a rotated D shape
Made some folds in the pants, bit baggier at the back
scaled the last 3 spikes.


Currently standing at over 3800 tris. Still have lots of cleaning up to do.

[edit] Haha, found a render of my old goku model..
http://img507.imageshack.us/img507/6230/goku3kingsag4.jpg
 
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last update on the model unless there are some good crits (Please? =))
 
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why do you make different folds?, anyway , from the 2/4 pic you see the feet looks craked up same as all but not in the bottom left window.

a only silluhet pic, of 3 views would help =)

gj!
 
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wow .. you reviced a topic from 2006! ;P

And .. is it just me that I get a server not found error on imageshack pics? >_>
 
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He looks so angry!!! Great model. His pants do seems a little high as you said. He also has a little camel toe which is kind of odd. He should have camel tail.
 
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Nice model dude! that badass face is spectacular! well done! :)
 
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Yeah good job on his expression.
You do needs some work on his gi the vest and legs(folds) look kinda flat and off.

Also you should turn that third upper spike of hair to the left, because it looks kind of weird facing forward like that.

And finally you should do something about his boots, they are way to straight in comparison to his legs that are so tilted. Just doesn't look natural, like he broke his shins or something.

Anyway that's my 2 cents, you got a great model going, but it looks awfully high poly.
 
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Man Shady, you been working on this one for a while now, huh? Looking forward to seeing him finished though, good luck :D.
 

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