Vegeta WIP!

[VeGeTa14]

WOW nice job...
realy good
on ssj hair jus beautiful

of side view the head is good i think

 

[Super Veggeto]

but the cell-shaded version can only be viewed in ms3d..
hl doesnt support cell-shading...

 

[Element4q2]

Finshed the assigning i'll send it to u when i'm on again.

 

[Super Veggeto]

thanks im on right now..
(need to talk to you)

 

[AuroraFlash]

well ... sorry for my rude behaviour ... i've got some serious problems at home ... it's like daily terror ...

the chin of vegeta is different ... you should change this a bit ...

 

[bouwplan]

i think the feet are to short
it makes me think of donald duck (dunno why :S )

 

[guest]

LOL, ur right too, lol, his feet kinda do look like Donal Duck, lol! but the SSJ looks wicked his hand is too pointy, it might be the andgle, but on the side pic, it looks like the hand is sharp

 

[AuroraFlash]

yeah ... freddy vs. jason ...

 

[guest]

what is it with that film? everyone refers everything to it, lol, but lets keep on-topic, don't want to anger the mods.... *turns heads shiftly l;eftt then right* hmmmm...... *runs* !!!

 

[AuroraFlash]

it was just that the comment on vegeta's hands reminded me at this movie ...

 

[guest]

Edward Scissor Hands? LOL

 

[AuroraFlash]

i know this movie ... it was really ... scary .. think about if you would wake up with those hands .... you could never ... do a lot of things ... again .... but no one would want to fight with you ...

 

[SoulStriker]

but the cell-shaded version can only be viewed in ms3d..
hl doesnt support cell-shading...

Lies!
I think you meant to say ESF may not support cel-shading.
From what I'v been told by my coding friend, 'real' cel-shading is code-based, in other words you make a skin, without any actual shading (using solid colors), and the code will control the shading, making the outline and all that stuff.

I only know this because its being put into the mod I work on

As for your model, it looks pretty good, except from the side view, which nuttzy already pointed out.

 

[Super Veggeto]

ok update ^^:

fixed the shape of the legs from the sides...the muscels are ok now...
iv'e longer the feet
shaped the stomech area for a better look
reskined the arms
he have albows now ^^
the hands are not so pointy now...(it's also because of the angel)

btw auroraflash and fortnox stop posting usless posts!
thanks for the crits nuttzy!

 

[Ominion]

Awesome but the only thing i can see that needs a change is the chin.. its too close to his chest on the side view. I think you should raise or move the head back a bit, or move his head up a bit so you can see his neck.

 

[VeGeTa14]

so this is looking about the end
so did you release it?
if yes WHEN?

 

[Super Veggeto]

you made me change my mind...
maby i wont release it :\

 

[-Origin]

Jeez Vegeta14 shut up already.....looking great SV, You have improved a lot lately :yes:

 

[Super Veggeto]

thanks "x"...^^
if anybody have more crits please post them cuz i want to know if im done...

 

[Dragon dude]

this contains only comment from side view: take the head higher so his chin will be a lil bit higher than his shoulder and take the head backwards about the half of vegetas chins length and remember to scale his head thicker