SSJ3 Goku wip

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the eyebrow bones need to be seperate. he looks like he has a unibrow hehe
 
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Iam i the only one who noticed the shirt is waaaaaaay off? or is that just me?
 
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Fire Phoenix said:
Iam i the only one who noticed the shirt is waaaaaaay off? or is that just me?
these are the kind of crits i hate seeing, people need to be more specific in there crits, how is it way off? what can he do to fix it? etc...
 
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He shouldn't need me to explain it. It's too damn noticeable. And i'm too lazy to put his pic and a goku pic in here. Go look at his shirt, then go look at a regular goku picture. His shirt is higher up, and not so rounded off like he has it. It makes more of a V.
 
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i think his shirt needs to be more of like a 'V' then a 'U' or semi v
 
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i think the model is final cause im skinning it atm...
but im not sure if yugo will tweak it anymore.
 
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looks great imo .
you nailed the ssj3 hair pretty well .
im working also on a ssj3 goku though i cant get the hair right >_<
btw sorry if i missed it but for what purpose are you doing this?
 
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The hair looks good, but the top half of the gi and shirt need to be more of a V:

<img src="http://boston.k12.ma.us/brighton/sen/elias/ssj3.jpg">

The muscles could still use some work, rather than having one big oval as a bicep, look at the ref pic and you'll see what I mean, but only do it if you have polies to spare, make the ears a bit thinner, they stick out too much. Finally, the gi looks like the sash is tight (like it should be) but the sash itself is too wide which looks very weird, i'd suggest making it smaller.
 

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