Poem

[Spitfire]

Originally posted by thor
please dont post anymore poems unless there farely decent

I'm so fricken sorry but you are really ticking me off now... These poems are good.. So just please, Shut the Hell up if its spam don't fricken add on to it... I'm sorry but you are getting annoying now you keep acting like the whole ancelotta(However you spell it) all around these forums.... I deserve a warning and all but its true. On topic Those poems are deep and I like that gaming poem

 

[Hibiki]

i got an idea why dont u both shut the **** up... :S


and u too act like a big shot on here fire...

 

[DiebytheSword]

Back on topic, which is poems. Do not flame. Anymore and I pull out the big stick and crown someone fool for the day! Any objections?

Constructive critisism from here on in. No, that poem sucks.

 

[NightShade]

The life of one can have a effect of another.
Life is like a cycle your actions can effect another and so on.
You helping one person that person could help another that person who you helped out might make something that changes the world.
stick and stones my break my bones but words...Yes words could effect someone.
The words you speak can have a impact on someones life.
Just like actions your words can be a powerful tool or a deadly gun that can hurt.
Where is the breeding grounds of all the pain and suffering?
To think about it i think where words hurt the most was at high School.
I go there with everyone else i go through what everyone goes through.
yet i see people pick make fun of others at something they can not help.
Will this change?...
will this ever end?...
No, I think it is human nature to do this.
To come close to changing this people would have to do one thing
grow up and look at the world in a diffrent way.

 

[SwordMaster]

i dont get it, why do all the GAME nerds put in poems???

Wierd I tell you, Wierd!!!

 

[NightShade]

cause it is fun. to me anyway. Some nerd off

 

[SwordMaster]

lol, okey then, its your choise..... :\

 

[NightShade]

you should give it a try. who cares what others think about ya. hell i am married got a nice house and a son on the way. *just found out last night life cant be any better.

 

[Wanzer General]

just wanted ta say congratz nightshade i hoped ya have no problems with the kid when he gets born or older for that matter X_^

 

[NightShade]

wanted to make another poem let out some stress...


When you work so hard for very little
When you know life is turning the other way
When you look for hope in a child
When you see your work paying the child
When you know you are doing your best
When you know she will try her best
When you know she is working hard
When you know she will become strong
With this gift you give your child.
with this gift you make her proud
With this gift love will shine
With this gift she gives you a smile
You now know why you work so hard
You now know things went far
You now know why life was hard
You gave your best each day
You gave it for her so she will stay
You want her life to be the best
That is why you gave your best.
This is why she loves you so
You gave your life for her So she could have a better one



*having a girl heh i thought it was a son i was wrong (

 

[P.o.h.s.XXX]

...its not bad that poem!!!

Better then your first trys!!!

Perhaps i should post some of my songs i wrote but.....
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...................................then someone is going to steal it!!!!