Piccolo [pbp WIP]

[Jimesu_Evil]

This is my first ever poly-by-poly model, so don't expect it to be fantastic. I've been obsessed with piccolo all week, and I noticed the lack of decent Piccolo models (although so far this will add to the count of bad ones) so I just decided to make him:

NO COPYING!
I'm going to make a cape & turban for him as well.

*EDIT* Here is the cape and turban:

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

what is up with these ppl and this no copying stuff.. i mean its not even done...

on topic: get rid of that skin.. dont care if its not the real one but ull be better off just using colored polies.. other than that.. good job so far ^_^

 

[Kyraza]

Dont like it

i dont like the skin nor the model u should make it ALOT better

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

he said it was his first so cut him some slack...<_<

anyways add the antena.. ^_^

 

[bapplebo]

the chin is a bit pointy, shortin it a bit

Want me to skin it?

EDIT: Oh, never mind, you already fixed it

 

[Jimesu_Evil]

UPDATE! *See first post*
Added the antennae, and got rid of the ugly skin
When it's finished I'll open a new thread to look for skinners, so do not ask to skin it here.
And Kyraza, maybe I'll listen to your comment if I see you do better. Next time, tell me why you don't like it.
Gameking, where is it too pointy? Can you do a drawover for me?

 

[Mystix]

Looking good man. I just think you should reduce the size of his eyebrows, they puff out too much, they look swollen. :laff:

Good job! 8/10 :yes:

*EDIT*

I also thing that his jaw is just a little too pointy, make it a little more rectangular than triangular. Something more the lines of this..

\__/

You know what I mean.

 

[Jimesu_Evil]

UPDATE *See first post*
Added the top part of his chest, made a bit of his neck, a bit of his gi, and made the eyebrows less puffy, I'll make the jaw a bit more rectangular.

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

niiice for a first pbp... its nice all around.. now give him a back ^_^

 

[Jimesu_Evil]

UPDATE *See first post*
Added a bit more of his gi, added the back of his neck, added the front of his arms, made the jaw less pointy.

*EDIT* UPDATE *See first post*
Completed the entire torso and arms (gotta do hands now). Current polycount: 1071

 

[Element4q2]

Not too bad, i wann see how it turns out

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

cant see image

 

[Jimesu_Evil]

Yeah I've got one of those "Free Hosts" with limited bandwidth, so I can't do anything about it. Sorry about that.

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

i can see image now.. and nice job.. add more detail to the arms model wize ^_^

 

[Jimesu_Evil]

I don't have time to work on it today, but I got all day tomorrow, so I'll work on the arm muscles then.

 

[Snow]

Looks good. I dont see anything wrong.

 

[Jimesu_Evil]

UPDATE *See first post*
Added half of his legs.

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

niiice for a first model.. waaaay better then my first.. keep up the good work kiddo ^_^

 

[Jimesu_Evil]

Actually, if you hadn't made your Gohan model, I would never have even bothered with this model. When I first saw your models (Chibi Vegeta, I'm sure you remember that little conflict.. lol) I thought "Hmm, another model editor. Then I saw your pbp Gohan and thought "Hey, he's got some skill". Maybe I should give pbp a try... And here it is! So in a way, thanks for the inspiration.

 

[Iyce Da Kidd]

heh uh thnx *rubs head like goku*