Paper Airplane of Love and DOOM!

[Death The Jedi]

Version 1: http://www.deviantart.com/view/4456484/
Version 2: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/4491200/


Modeled the airplane in Milkshape 3D, skinned it in Photoshop 7, rendered it in Cinema 4D.

Tell me what you think :]

**EDIT**

Updated with version 2

 

[Mike88]

scary lookin

 

[Synth]

ingenius, the paper cut of love and doom!

 

[Optimus Prime]

Looks good, but looks more like a triangle with a slit in it, if it were longer and thinner, it would look more like a paper airplane, otherwise :yes:

 

[Suh Dude]

Lol you release for ts, quite cool acually

 

[Alteh]

Looks cool except for the paper, the paper seems really thick.

 

[Death The Jedi]

yeah, the paper is rather thick I suppose, it's my first model ever though.. so that probably explains it.

 

[Hash]

Interesting, but um, where is the love? I'm getting lots of doom vibes, very little love vibes.

 

[Death The Jedi]

There's a heart on the right wing...

 

[dudeman]

doesnt really look like a heart...

 

[Deverz]

Does to me

I agree about the paper thickness and the length/width of the plane

 

[Judge]

hmm now I can see the heart . it's a good one for the first time, but indeed the paper is a bit too thick, and I think you didnt spend too much time on the brushin on the plane. it's not bad tho

 

[Death The Jedi]

hmm now I can see the heart . it's a good one for the first time, but indeed the paper is a bit too thick, and I think you didnt spend too much time on the brushin on the plane. it's not bad tho

You're right, I spent almost no time at all on it. I was just kinda messing around, trying to make a more bloody skin to put in-game, and I imported that into the model, and it looked kinda cool, so I added the text.

 

[Death The Jedi]

Updated it with version 2

 

[Amitron]

on version 2 it looks much more like an airplane. Good job

 

[Optimus Prime]

Version 2 is much better, you fixed all the major crits, width, length, thickness, looks awesome Jedi.

 

[Death The Jedi]

I Might do another more.... realistic version I suppose. Only problem is I can't get C4D to do a realistic render, so if anyone can help me, that would be great ^_^

 

[Optimus Prime]

Realistic meaning more folds/lines etc?

 

[Judge]

yeah version 2 is a lot better, by the way you may want to ask this question about the 3d program in the modelling section aswell, I think they know a lot more about the programs

 

[Synth]

version 2 is almost identical to a real paper airplane, now it looks even more deadly.

9/10