Orange-ness!

[bapplebo]

That am uber. I didn't get the blue-suit version because I don't prefer that version, but this one might over-ride NeD's model O_O.

 

[movento]

I like it.but if it's based on the buu saga then the blue V-part should be bigger.I also like the way you model the bi-and triceps.IMO some parts look a little dark ,and his boots should be longer.I know these are tiny crits that don't really matter much(sorry for me crappy english ).Overall you did a wonderful job,the side view is just perfect,gotta love that hair.Keep it up!

 

[LaHeen]

but this one might over-ride NeD's model O_O.

I Highly doubt that davie's model would over ride neds. (No offence davie ^_^) Besides, there both different style's so comparing them wouldnt really work ;o.

It looks very good though, im loving it ;D.

 

[The_Real_Legend]

thanks man, those crits really helped, im tweaking the eyes, and yeah they shudda been a bit further appart, just need to do some tweaking to the nose skin and it should be good, thanks man =]

no problem, i'm glad it helped.

About the colours, he does look kind of orange i think that needs some tweaking too.

I'll try to do a little colour edit in photoshop, hold on.

edit:
This should about do it for the colours. Might have to be a tad lighter and a bit more saturated. Hope this helps too

 

[Skiwan]

i know what you're saying about the skin colour, its just imo, goku is tanned, not as much as trunks or vegeta, but he is tanned, skin colour tends not to be pink either its more yellow than we think, (depending on light mostly)

Check the tut btw, its like my bible >_> : http://itchstudios.com/psg/art_tut.htm

see i prefer that skintone, thing is its hard to make it not look too saturated in the shaddowed parts, which is what i think i might've done wrong, but im not gonna start it all again, as ive tried messing with the skintone loads in photoshop

 

[The_Real_Legend]

Yeah i know what you mean. I was kind of going for the pail yellow colour goku actually has. Only in ssj their skin colours turn to actual pink, otherwise it's from a pail yellow to a almost brown of vegeta. But then again if you look up some pics of the original japanese episodes he's skin do tend to have pink in them.

Look: this pic isn't edited it's straight from a original japanese episode, they were much more saturated and lighter then the edits funimation made.


oh and thanks for the cool tutorial btw. Looks like i'll have some reading to do, sweet.

 

[Ravendust]

Those colours look perfect to me, although his skintone could be made lighter

 

[CM]

His clothes could use some highlights. Maybe the skin too, but the model is fine. Good job.

 

[KidMan]

I love it. Its very nice as is David. I love how you keep tweaking the model.... There is only so much you can do David, remember that.

 

[CrackerJack]

Btw, if your wondering why MP/Twister asked for arm frames, its because you dont really have arms that deform very well. On your gt, whenever the arms bent, it looked rather horid. You need to work on some kind of joint on your next model to make it look better ingame.

To late now of course, considering it is skinned but just a heads up for the future.

 

[Damaera]

Heh, much better skin then your last one. 10/10 =D

 

[Almighty_Gir]

i liked his last one a lot (the blue jacket). i actually perfered its skintone to this one =/

 

[Skiwan]

>_> i havent changed the skintone... maybe its cuz i lowered the ammount of light in the renders >_<, i'll look into the skintone =], oh and CJ how wud i go about fixing the deforms in the arm? i know the arms didnt fit the skeleton very well, but the most worrying thing i thought was the deltoid deformed odly... but i thought that was due to the way it was rigged >_<

 

[CrackerJack]

Well, it could of been the assigning, or just not fitting to the skeleton very. Ill take a look at the old one in Ms3d, and give a drawover tommorow.

 

[Skiwan]

that'd be awesome cj, Thanks =P

I've decided to donate this model to BTL (Break the limit) a new mod for esf that looks very promising. This means the model isnt going to be released to the public untill btl is released, this also means im going to be doing all forms up to stage 4, so wish me luck with that >_>

Here's some updates:

some more screenies cuz i dont think the ones in the presentation do it justice =P:

Normal:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v148/davidskiwan/gokuside.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v148/davidskiwan/gokunormal2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v148/davidskiwan/gokunormal3.jpg

SSJ:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v148/davidskiwan/gokunssjside.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v148/davidskiwan/gokunssj1.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v148/davidskiwan/gokunssj2.jpg

Hope you like it, i might reskin the ssj hair, but im not sure, depends what people think =]

Enjoy

 

[KidMan]

Dude David it looks nice, beautiful. I like your style cause it looks like anime and not realistic.

 

[The_Real_Legend]

Heh nice, I like how did that little variation on the eyes between normal and ssj. That's pretty much how it should be.

But now you have a ssj form a seriously think you need to change the skincolour of that form. Between normal and ssj there really is a difference, ssj's ressembling western people with the light skintone and blond hair...

Oh and the haircolour might have to be a little less saturated, it only gets like that when the ssj has an aura around him.

But ofcourse those are all some minor details and the models still look great.

 

[RavenTrunks]

Love that anime style!

 

[LaHeen]

Arnt you forgetting his little sign on his shirt? D; Looking very good david, goes to show what you can do with some determination.

 

[Skiwan]

heh, im going for cell saga style, he never had a sign on his gi when he had a wrapped around belt, only when he had a tied belt

Thing about the skintone Legend is, ive done what you said, i altered the hue and the saturation slightly, but if i go more than -3 on the hue it looks way too pink. Plus in dbz due to the fact of many many different animators working on it throughout the 10 years or so it was animated you'd find it understandable that the hues of colours changed every so often, even from one scene to another they'd use different colours, especially if it was different lighting. If you look at the manga colours the skintones are even more orange than mine, due to the fact that the only ink colours he could use to get the right colour is red and yellow/add more water to make it paler. Im going to see if i can change it anymore, but when i try as i say it doesnt look right to me... take a look at these to see how it can change hugely:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v148/davidskiwan/example2.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v148/davidskiwan/example1.jpg

i'll see what i can do though =P